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      There is no Bliss when you twist my wrist
 and put me down you say you love me while you pull my hair i wouldnt dare stare because i couldnt bare the stairs that tear the gentle fabric that you cherish on on those sotted nights of sodomy,passion and pain waking with the look of disdain as i try too flee to safety from the pain the remains from the insane love that you have for me | |
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      "There is no Bliss when you twist my wrist 
 and put me down" Perfect opening. Perfectly true....A very poignant and important write   | |
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| "There is no Bliss when you twist my wrist and put me down" Perfect opening. Perfectly true....A very poignant and important write       | |
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      powerful write   | |
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|    nice write dude | |
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      Good shot    | |
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| powerful write     | |
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|    nice write dude   | |
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