Topic: bad rhyming but it still made me smile
ciggskill's photo
Mon 11/10/08 07:25 PM
i got this in an add request...



Your lips, your eyes, your soul Are like a work of art, The most creative thing of all Is your beautiful heart. If you were a painting, No colours could express The beauty deep inside you, A rainbow, nothing less. If you were a sculpture The clay could hardly make Your figure of an angel Without one mistake. If you were a euphony No choir could really sing All the beautiful music Your eyes could possibly bring. So here I am, an artist, With inspiration beyond belief But to capture such rare beauty, I'd have to be a thief.

msmyka's photo
Mon 11/10/08 07:28 PM

i got this in an add request...



Your lips, your eyes, your soul Are like a work of art, The most creative thing of all Is your beautiful heart. If you were a painting, No colours could express The beauty deep inside you, A rainbow, nothing less. If you were a sculpture The clay could hardly make Your figure of an angel Without one mistake. If you were a euphony No choir could really sing All the beautiful music Your eyes could possibly bring. So here I am, an artist, With inspiration beyond belief But to capture such rare beauty, I'd have to be a thief.


Oh yeah, I've received that very same email a few times now slaphead rofl

ciggskill's photo
Mon 11/10/08 07:32 PM


i got this in an add request...



Your lips, your eyes, your soul Are like a work of art, The most creative thing of all Is your beautiful heart. If you were a painting, No colours could express The beauty deep inside you, A rainbow, nothing less. If you were a sculpture The clay could hardly make Your figure of an angel Without one mistake. If you were a euphony No choir could really sing All the beautiful music Your eyes could possibly bring. So here I am, an artist, With inspiration beyond belief But to capture such rare beauty, I'd have to be a thief.


Oh yeah, I've received that very same email a few times now slaphead rofl


lol i feel like an ass, i thought i was special bahaha. guess i'm just another fish among the sea of lame repeat e-mails.

TxsGal3333's photo
Mon 11/10/08 08:09 PM
Actually it rhymes very well if it is posted the way it was wrote. Ohh and I posted the Poet at the bottom this one she posted in 2006 yes it was wrote by a woman at that.



Beauty

Your lips, your eyes, your soul
Are like a work of art,
The most creative thing of all
Is your beautiful heart.

If you were a painting,
No colors could express
The beauty deep inside you,
A rainbow, nothing less.

If you were a sculpture
The clay could hardly make
Your figure of an angel
Without one mistake.

If you were a euphony
No choir could really sing
All the beautiful music
Your eyes could possibly bring.

So here I am, an artist,
With inspiration beyond belief
But to capture such rare beauty,
I'd have to be a thief.

- Zlata S. Steere -