I want to wake up
with a silly smile
and a belly rumbling
growling
with anticipation
I want to feel romance
I want to take a chance
and dance wildly
…gladly…
……madly…
to a tune
only you and I
can hear

I want to lay down
under midnight skies
that are faded and dimmed
by the stars in my eyes
as I contemplate
with contented sighs
the blood rushing
through my veins
as you paralyze
with ice blue hot shot
desires
staring me down
bringing me round
to your way of thinking

I don’t want to think
I want to drink
stumbling drunk
with the heady wine
of desire
lit up and on fire
when you
whisper my name
lifting me higher
than I ever thought
I could float
adrift on the boat
of ecstasy
fantasy
just you and me
…yeah…

I want to be a song
sweet on your lips
a soft melody sung
I want to be an instrument
fine tuned and
high strung
beautifully
strummed
played by
skilled fingers
stroking
plucking
at notes
never …
…before heard

I want to go to bed
counting the hours
and minutes
until I hear your voice
see your face
lay soft and worn
in your warm embrace
knowing that if
I never woke up
my life would be
sweet
complete
filled with
everything and
anything I ever
lost
…and found …

Yeah, that’s what I want

I want to be …
…in ...
……Love.

perfection.... hoping one day you feel it all...

I hope we all feel it my lamb

I revised the stanza about being an instrument, does it work better?

Very nice... reading your posting has started my day with a smile.... Tanks....

Thank you, that's one of the best compliments I've ever gotten on my writing - making a persons day smiley!

From what I think I remember before, the flow of that stanza and the intent are better the second time around. It all flows effortlessly now.

Oh good, thanks! I really was uncomfortable with it before and couldnt figure out how to rework it until last night! Dont you hate that???

You are welcome... Have a great weekend....

yes, I do and when the fit is right- you can now breathe a sigh of relief. It seems that the best lines to me come while driving home or being interrupted at work on my lunch. Sometimes they never do come back to me- I try to scribble but can't always read my writing.

Very nice write, MsWizard!! I love it!! Thanx for sharing!!

My best lines come about 3:00 and I think I've broken my toes by crawling out of bed in the dark fumbling around for a pen and paper to get them down before I forget them! Aye carumba!

Good morning sweetpea! Thank you! Are you having a wonderful Saturday?

You too!

To love

Yes, so far so good!! I actually just woke up!

Wonderful! Have a relaxing and smile filled day darlin'

To love!

I hope to!! You do the same, sweetie!!

I truly LOVE this write A....it is so beautiful and passionate....the entire piece is brilliantly done....Ty for sharing once more....it's the kind of write that could and should be read again and again

I'm so glad you like it my angelface-as I told pkd that one stanza was bothering me in a way I couldnt figure out until last night