Written for someone on gotpoetry, by me.

I can relate, have traveled and left in that lonely state,
hatred filled my veins, alone it did rain,
once again, you take in a leap of fate
only to hit the gate
walks of one-sided talks
mass destruction of corrupt thoughts
only brings pain and vain
not wanting ever to go on again
you cry out hear me roar
as you walk the desert floor
no one wants to hear the dysfunction
unhealthy person is their only assumption
so ever lonely, now you stray
as you walk the shores in dismay
you seal up all goodness, you shout and cuss
for now you feel there's no one to trust
but there's a way, if your willing to try
thinking positive, as each day goes by
are you willing to give yourself a chance
I sure one day you'll find romance
open your heart , don't seal it shut
it's just right now, you feel it in a rut
although the the road, has weeds in the way
things will look so different, later on, is what I got to say.
Take some time back off a bit,
go to a hilltop take a fit,
yell and scream, spill it all out
thrash and trash, let yourself shout
try to let yourself go through the grief
till you can somehow one day believe
time it will take to make yourself heal
I know how you feel, but this is the real deal.

by Noden

Just cause I care!

Very good write sis...like the icon too by the way.

A heart of gold you possess
That is why I love you best
Unselfish,caring loving and giving
The strength of a woman driven
I'm blessed by your friendship golden
That is why you're my sister, My Noden


I love you girl

Ali

Lady this is a really wonderful piece! Made my heart ache...

I'm keeping this forever, and ever in a day, you have brought tears to my eyes woman, I treasure the day I met you, you have brought more strength to me, and have never failed me, no matter what time of the day or night, when I needed you, your always there, I hold your heart in my hands and feed it with all the love and nourishment it needs and as long as I live, there is not a person in the world that could thrash your name around me, I swear this to you, my sis, and in blood I wear your name in my heart!

thank you so much

I am so happy you loved it, that person it was written for is as special as I meant this poem to be...thank you lurchs sister...

I cannot express how much this has choked me ( in a good way) I blessed the day we found each other, now we'd better stop before the folks on this forum throw up with all of this sugary sweetness we are lobbing at each other

Awesome Write!

I am still gonna say I love ya, and I don't give a poops ass who sees, god what is the world today when we can't express our feeling to one another without someone thinking something stupid about it...so there!

Love ya

LOVE YOU TOO!!!

Thank you Robert, my brother, glad you stopped in...

WWWWWWWWWWwwooooooohoooooooo! thank you!

LOVE YOU TOO!!!, So There it's out there, whewfff!

Can I breath freely now?

BRAVO, dear Noden. Here's hoping you inspired someone in the best way possible-through your love.

nice
lady of the stars