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Topic: Beautiful Illusions
brwnkimba Joined Tue 05/22/07 Posts: 1276	Wed 11/05/08 12:26 PM
As far reaching the imagination can carry, No learned skill will ever match loves tare. Find me in her plot filled with the bouquet of spring. If wishes were granted I'd love hearing your voice sing. A song I dance to in my dreams wakes me with delightful calm. Exhume this shelled craving of fantasy in spite of somehow feeling wrong. Yes to your many requests I assure you only my very best. Press less as your quest serves my chest with heart pounding in excess. Police my charm if it pleases thee to do so. I release my guard leaving me open, lost like Robinson Caruso. Pearls of wisdom strand me along beds of confusion. Longing for someone real I can hold close instead of these beautiful illusions.

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Wed 11/05/08 12:32 PM
More than Heartfelt! And I love this line...."No learned skill will ever match loves tare." because it is Truth. Ty for your write

brwnkimba Joined Tue 05/22/07 Posts: 1276	Wed 11/05/08 12:43 PM
Thank you AngelLight

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Wed 11/05/08 12:44 PM
"Exhume this shelled craving of fantasy in spite of somehow feeling wrong. " This reverberated like a gong continually struck by meditations call.

brwnkimba Joined Tue 05/22/07 Posts: 1276	Wed 11/05/08 01:07 PM
Ohhh Yessss! Thank you DKOW for feeling this

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76436	Wed 11/05/08 01:11 PM
One day you will find the one you seek and she will no longer be and illusion but reality instead

brwnkimba Joined Tue 05/22/07 Posts: 1276	Wed 11/05/08 01:38 PM
COOL INCENSE BURN 1 FOR ME TxsGal

Noden Joined Mon 06/11/07 Posts: 5050	Wed 11/05/08 01:53 PM
Awesome peace!

brwnkimba Joined Tue 05/22/07 Posts: 1276	Wed 11/05/08 02:21 PM
Thank you Noden and hey that tree carving looks like a couple of things to me one's a heart.

Noden Joined Mon 06/11/07 Posts: 5050	Wed 11/05/08 02:36 PM
Thank you Noden and hey that tree carving looks like a couple of things to me one's a heart. I thought that too, made you smile I bet....

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76436	Wed 11/05/08 02:56 PM
COOL INCENSE BURN 1 FOR ME TxsGal Your welcome took me awhile to find that one but thought it fit well with your poem.

Noden Joined Mon 06/11/07 Posts: 5050	Wed 11/05/08 02:59 PM Edited by Noden on Wed 11/05/08 03:00 PM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JFwcmU6Ql0A

brwnkimba Joined Tue 05/22/07 Posts: 1276	Thu 11/06/08 05:40 AM
Thank you Noden and hey that tree carving looks like a couple of things to me one's a heart. I thought that too, made you smile I bet.... A wager you would win

MisKim323 Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 14563	Thu 11/06/08 05:50 AM
"A song I dance to in my dreams wakes me with delightful calm." How beautiful to hear the music

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Thu 11/06/08 07:10 AM
visual phenomena quite heartwarming

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Thu 11/06/08 07:14 AM
Excellent Write! Thought I was reading something as soothing as an Angel write from a male perspective

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Thu 11/06/08 02:20 PM
simply beautiful...and may you find the one to fit as perfect as the picture Kristi found for you.

brwnkimba Joined Tue 05/22/07 Posts: 1276	Thu 11/06/08 04:32 PM
LaMom, Pkd1220,MisKim, and d4tc, You are all such wonderful writers I can only express the daily grind with the inspiration I draw from such skilled wordsmittys like all of you are. Thank you so much for the very kind words.