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Topic: This KISS
sweetcountrygirl Joined Tue 10/03/06 Posts: 2463	Thu 04/05/07 12:03 PM
This Kiss You are like fire running through my veins burning me up from the inside out such painful pleasure is what you bring waiting for you is the pain and the release you bring makes me fall to my knees Dreaming of the taste of you Yearning for so long to reach out and touch skin so soft, silk in my hands Your breath on my neck Sweet words whispered in my ear Hands in my hair Your tongue parting my lips Pulling you near, I hear you sigh I feel your thighs next to mine Our hips begin to grind This sweet ecstasy makes me blind to what is around me I am in bliss just dreaming about this heated KISS... SCG 4/5/2007

soffit Joined Thu 02/15/07 Posts: 1165	Thu 04/05/07 12:34 PM
MAN ITS HOT IN HERE AFTER THAT!

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76471	Thu 04/05/07 12:35 PM
Hummmmmm Huhhhhh and what ya up to there girlfriend lol

sweetcountrygirl Joined Tue 10/03/06 Posts: 2463	Thu 04/05/07 12:40 PM
Awwwwwwwww Txs..you know me...always dreamin... (daydreamin bout night things in the middle of the afternoon...!) LOLOL! Hey soffit...I wrote it, how do ya think I feel???...LOL!

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76471	Thu 04/05/07 12:46 PM
Hummmmm hey that should be a song ohhh yeah dreaming about those night things in the day time is a song huhh lmao yeppiers got pretty warm with that kinda kiss. Hummmm think it got pretty darn hot actually lol

sweetcountrygirl Joined Tue 10/03/06 Posts: 2463	Thu 04/05/07 12:49 PM
Yep, It is a country song...not sure who the artist is but I can hear it in my head... "I'm havin daydreams" I wanna say Waylin Jennings...but not sure...LOL!

soffit Joined Thu 02/15/07 Posts: 1165	Thu 04/05/07 12:49 PM
YOU MUST BE DRIPPING WET ITS SO HOT IN THERE. YOU SO CAPTURE THE MOMENT WITH YOUR WORDS ITS JUST HOT! I LOVE YOUR OTHER WORK OF THE DAY ALSO. I THINK I NEED TO GO READ IT TO CALM DOWN!

sweetcountrygirl Joined Tue 10/03/06 Posts: 2463	Thu 04/05/07 12:53 PM
Soffit...Imaginations....hmmm...They have a way of running away with you don't they...

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76471	Thu 04/05/07 12:55 PM
Hummm girlfriend not Waylon I can guarantee think it is more closer to Tom T Hall but will have to check hell I can hear the song us to listen to it all the time. okay telling my age now shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhsssss lol

soffit Joined Thu 02/15/07 Posts: 1165	Thu 04/05/07 12:57 PM
Yes and thank God for it, lately its needed.

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76471	Thu 04/05/07 01:01 PM
Ronnie Milsap sang that song "Daydreams about Night Things"

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Thu 04/05/07 01:21 PM
WoW!!!!!!!!!!!! Thats a kiss,, (((((Wanda))))))

karmafury Joined Sun 11/12/06 Posts: 10156	Thu 04/05/07 01:26 PM
Now I'm happy it snowed last night. Back to the balcony.

ChubbyCherubPoet Joined Fri 10/06/06 Posts: 23222	Thu 04/05/07 05:06 PM
Whewwwwwwww SCG gurl whatcha doin to me here lol smokin!!!

hells_angel07 Joined Tue 04/03/07 Posts: 363	Thu 04/05/07 06:44 PM
i read this to my b/f and he said that he liked it

Gryphyn Joined Sat 10/28/06 Posts: 3031	Thu 04/05/07 10:39 PM
Guess I'll got out back with the dog and gets some air, Back in a while. G

soffit Joined Thu 02/15/07 Posts: 1165	Fri 04/06/07 12:16 PM
Man it happened again I gotta cool off!

sweetcountrygirl Joined Tue 10/03/06 Posts: 2463	Sat 04/07/07 11:14 AM
You guys are awesome! Love you all.. Thanks for the comps! Really! I had to go outside myself..hehehe... Can you believe it is hailing here right now... April in Louisiana and it is hailing..WEIRD!!!