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Topic: Bags
Mschelle86 Joined Thu 10/30/08 Posts: 34	Fri 10/31/08 05:43 PM
Bags hold the tears beneath my eyes wide open Gettn no sleep dazed in a dream of things that could come to be Yet my eyes still open Wide open U... a pill I'd overdose on U got me addicted Ur love some sort of drug I want to abuse it Zoned out Eyes still open...wide open I day dream in the dark 4u i open up The door 2my heart And hope u walk in but until then I'll shut my eyes and dream again

Roco Joined Sat 03/22/08 Posts: 1165	Fri 10/31/08 06:00 PM
..sounds like the next morning after taking quality ex..and lover is not there yet..know the feeling.. roco

Mschelle86 Joined Thu 10/30/08 Posts: 34	Fri 10/31/08 06:06 PM
uuuummmm.... sorry.... but not quite

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Fri 10/31/08 07:57 PM
Bags hold the tears beneath my eyes wide open Gettn no sleep dazed in a dream of things that could come to be Yet my eyes still open Wide open U... a pill I'd overdose on U got me addicted Ur love some sort of drug I want to abuse it Zoned out Eyes still open...wide open I day dream in the dark 4u i open up The door 2my heart And hope u walk in but until then I'll shut my eyes and dream again This is really solid and good. Not too in your face, holding just enough mystery to question. I like it.

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