(I wrote this peom when I was 18...what do u think?)

Between my hips you taste my lips and mark your kiss
As kisses meet
I taste your tongue
You taste my tongue
I taste my lips
Your touch has got me creaming in a total bliss
Sixty-nine ways to have your way with me
Take out your toys and play with me
Tasty
I taste me as I lick your fingers of my cream
My plans are not to tease
I only want to please
And I heard that you like candy
Well, I taste sweet
Once you taste my body the flavor will leave you addicted
I'll twerk in your face as you lick it
You got me on you like you're ecstacy
And I think Im about to O.D.
Now, dont get me wrong
In the end
I just want you to hold me
But right now make love to me
Lick me from head to toe and do it nice and slow
Though me let your love flow
As you taste my rainbow.

kinky

wow, they allow that in schools?

lol i didnt write while I was in school. I wrote when i was 18 thats what i mean

I'll twerk in your face as you lick it...what does twerk mean???

twerk means to rotate basically

oh ok...kinky

..wow..if you wrote this at age only age 18..i can only imagine (lustfully) what the updated version is..= )

roco

if its been a while..and you need your memory refreshed..let me know..i'll work with you on it = )..

"through me let your love flow"...i really like that part...i wonder if i can say that to a girl..i think it will only work if a girl says it to a guy..

roco

I like this. Clearly as an 18 year old, you hadn't learned the art of sensual subtlety, but you've got the right concept here. I dont know how old you are now, but I bet if you rewrote it, you'd pack it with a lot more subtlety which can be far more powerful than the in your face writing you've presented here. Irregardless, this is pretty damn good. Really.

whoa!!!!
caught me off guard....

nice work though...