Topic: Tandem- A Tale Of Murder pt 2
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Fri 10/31/08 07:29 AM
Edited by Cavatica on Fri 10/31/08 07:29 AM
Your eye ball crunches in my mouth like a pomegranate seed
The vitreous fluid sliding down my gullet
So sweet, so tantalizing, must have more
I hold you by your throat, my nails piercing your tender flesh
Masters voice whispering in my ear
"Yessss, more you must have more
Make me strong again
Taste the tender sweet flesh of the Innocent ones"

Licking my lips in anticipation I reach now with my other hand
Pressing my nails against your stomach as I slowly disembowel you
Your intestines curling around my arm as they slip from your body
Steam rising up in the air as you scream, your screams an orchestra to my ears
Sliding my hand through the rest of your innards, aiming for the best part
Your heart, while it still beats, feeling it now pulsing between my fingers
Pulling it free from your chest, licking the crimson drops as it slows its pumping
Baring my teeth,biting down upon your heart, crunching it between my teeth
"Sleep innocent one sleep, I shall take your soul and flesh
into my hell is your final rest"

The other cowering now at my feet in fear ,begging and pleading for her life
Whimpering and whispering, promising me everything I could ever desire
Little does she know she too will dance among my hell fire
Snatching her up by the hair, waving her around in the air as if she were a rag doll
Cackling and screaming at the top of my lungs, her terror has only just begun

Smashing her body down upon the ground, it makes the most delicious sound
A sickening snap and crunch as bones shatter and break
My knife glittering in the fading sun light as I slowly flay her skin
Her screams and shouts lulling me into a trance, in her skin I now dance
The Master's voice now silent, no longer guiding me, no longer directing my every move
My eyes now full of desire, as I too dance among my own hell fire
Speckled and splattered in blood, gore covering my face
I reach down now cracking open her skull, revealing her brain
Plunging my hand inside her cranium, squishing my fingers through her gray matter
Aching now to have a taste, binging m fingers slowly up to my face
Flicking my tongue out,wrapping it around her brains
Growing heady with intoxication as I swallow her gray matter

So wrapped up in my feeding frenzy, never hearing the other voices, the sirens
The Master's voice so very silent now, not even the merest whisper as I bend down now and kiss her
Grabbed from behind and jerked to my feet, my eyes now slowly focusing
Words shouted at me that I cannot understand, roughly shoved and pulled, handcuffs so tight around my wrists
Shackled and led to a car, confused and scared I start to cry
Screaming out for my Master, asking him why
"Master Master why have you forsaken me, did I not please you, did I not do everything you asked of me"

Sitting here now in this room with walls of white
Wrapped so tightly in this jacket, rocking to and fro whimpering for my Master
Hearing the whispers from the doctors and nurses
Knowing now that my Master was false, nothing but he voices in my head
As I sit her wishing I too were dead



** Thank you for being ever so patient in waiting for this**



doodlebuggrrl's photo
Fri 10/31/08 07:48 AM
love awesomelove

TxsGal3333's photo
Fri 10/31/08 09:09 AM
Wow I must have missed #1 shsh this was Awesome!!

You need to do this story in a book form this would be one that the reader could not put down.:thumbsup:

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Fri 10/31/08 09:16 AM
Waited in great anticipation for part 2 and then regretted that I was eating chocolate cake for lunch as I read. Descriptions, the anticipation and sickness of it all- perfectly written. I am no longer hungry. BRAVO andpitchfork devil BRAVO

Happy Halloween!!!

d4tc's photo
Fri 10/31/08 10:39 AM
Another Great Write! flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Fri 10/31/08 12:54 PM
Yep a Book is in order,, so worth the wait,,,

Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmm Yummy bigsmile flowers

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Fri 10/31/08 05:06 PM
This is not my thing, but damn girl, I was glued to the screen. Very well done, but I really would prefer to skip the movie. The book -- Oh, heck yeah!