Topic: Tandem- A Tale Of Murder pt 2 | |
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Cavatica
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Fri 10/31/08 07:29 AM
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Your eye ball crunches in my mouth like a pomegranate seed
The vitreous fluid sliding down my gullet So sweet, so tantalizing, must have more I hold you by your throat, my nails piercing your tender flesh Masters voice whispering in my ear "Yessss, more you must have more Make me strong again Taste the tender sweet flesh of the Innocent ones" Licking my lips in anticipation I reach now with my other hand Pressing my nails against your stomach as I slowly disembowel you Your intestines curling around my arm as they slip from your body Steam rising up in the air as you scream, your screams an orchestra to my ears Sliding my hand through the rest of your innards, aiming for the best part Your heart, while it still beats, feeling it now pulsing between my fingers Pulling it free from your chest, licking the crimson drops as it slows its pumping Baring my teeth,biting down upon your heart, crunching it between my teeth "Sleep innocent one sleep, I shall take your soul and flesh into my hell is your final rest" The other cowering now at my feet in fear ,begging and pleading for her life Whimpering and whispering, promising me everything I could ever desire Little does she know she too will dance among my hell fire Snatching her up by the hair, waving her around in the air as if she were a rag doll Cackling and screaming at the top of my lungs, her terror has only just begun Smashing her body down upon the ground, it makes the most delicious sound A sickening snap and crunch as bones shatter and break My knife glittering in the fading sun light as I slowly flay her skin Her screams and shouts lulling me into a trance, in her skin I now dance The Master's voice now silent, no longer guiding me, no longer directing my every move My eyes now full of desire, as I too dance among my own hell fire Speckled and splattered in blood, gore covering my face I reach down now cracking open her skull, revealing her brain Plunging my hand inside her cranium, squishing my fingers through her gray matter Aching now to have a taste, binging m fingers slowly up to my face Flicking my tongue out,wrapping it around her brains Growing heady with intoxication as I swallow her gray matter So wrapped up in my feeding frenzy, never hearing the other voices, the sirens The Master's voice so very silent now, not even the merest whisper as I bend down now and kiss her Grabbed from behind and jerked to my feet, my eyes now slowly focusing Words shouted at me that I cannot understand, roughly shoved and pulled, handcuffs so tight around my wrists Shackled and led to a car, confused and scared I start to cry Screaming out for my Master, asking him why "Master Master why have you forsaken me, did I not please you, did I not do everything you asked of me" Sitting here now in this room with walls of white Wrapped so tightly in this jacket, rocking to and fro whimpering for my Master Hearing the whispers from the doctors and nurses Knowing now that my Master was false, nothing but he voices in my head As I sit her wishing I too were dead ** Thank you for being ever so patient in waiting for this** |
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awesome
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Wow I must have missed #1 shsh this was Awesome!!
You need to do this story in a book form this would be one that the reader could not put down. |
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Waited in great anticipation for part 2 and then regretted that I was eating chocolate cake for lunch as I read. Descriptions, the anticipation and sickness of it all- perfectly written. I am no longer hungry. BRAVO and BRAVO
Happy Halloween!!! |
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Another Great Write!
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Yep a Book is in order,, so worth the wait,,,
Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmm Yummy |
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This is not my thing, but damn girl, I was glued to the screen. Very well done, but I really would prefer to skip the movie. The book -- Oh, heck yeah!
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