Topic: Given Promise
Fadedspirit's photo
Tue 10/28/08 10:06 PM
Given Promise

I could take you to a mountain top
And give the world to you,
But I'm sure that's not your way
Or what I should really do.

I could take you to a shoreline
And give you all the sea
But then you'd surely doubt me dear
And maybe you would flee.

I thought that I could buy you
The finest jewels and gold
But then you see right through
And then you I couldn't hold.

I pondered just a moment
And thought for many days,
I remembered your sweet heart, my dear,
And thought what you would say.

Then I got this basket
And filled it with some things.
I added just two candlesticks
Before we went away.

As I spread the blanket
And bid my darling sit,
I give you just an empty box
And get the candles lit.

Take the fears we have right now
And place them all inside,
Even all those nasty ones
That tend to run and hide.

Now take those words that hurt us dear
And pack the tears we've cried,
Yes pack our darkest memories
And all of any lies.

Now our box is full
Of what we'll never need.
Let me dig a hole,
Nevermore we'll ever see.

Reaching to the basket,
I hear a gentle sigh,
As I uncork a bottle
And pour us a taste of wine.

The candlelight within your eyes
Shines just like the stars,
I feed you with the love I have
As I take away your scars.

They say a kiss is just a kiss
Unless a love's involved
But my dear I seal upon your lips
A promise to life's mystery solved.

Fadedspirit 10/24/2008

LAMom's photo
Wed 10/29/08 08:04 AM
this has simply taken my breath away

Beautiful flowers

Differentkindofwench's photo
Wed 10/29/08 10:01 AM
Stunning!

BonnyMiss's photo
Wed 10/29/08 11:26 AM
You sure have hit the right note Fade. Wondrously delicious !

Mystique42's photo
Wed 10/29/08 02:37 PM
This one has left me speechless... very nice.flowers flowers flowers

Fadedspirit's photo
Wed 10/29/08 06:51 PM
LAMom, you never cease to bring a smile when ya visit. I'm glad you liked it. flowers

Thanks DKW. :smile: flowerforyou

Aww, thanks BonnyMiss. :smile: flowerforyou

Awww, thanks Mystique. happy flowers
At times a heart speaks through the mind of a beholder and bears gifts to those who seek. flowers