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Given Promise
I could take you to a mountain top And give the world to you, But I'm sure that's not your way Or what I should really do. I could take you to a shoreline And give you all the sea But then you'd surely doubt me dear And maybe you would flee. I thought that I could buy you The finest jewels and gold But then you see right through And then you I couldn't hold. I pondered just a moment And thought for many days, I remembered your sweet heart, my dear, And thought what you would say. Then I got this basket And filled it with some things. I added just two candlesticks Before we went away. As I spread the blanket And bid my darling sit, I give you just an empty box And get the candles lit. Take the fears we have right now And place them all inside, Even all those nasty ones That tend to run and hide. Now take those words that hurt us dear And pack the tears we've cried, Yes pack our darkest memories And all of any lies. Now our box is full Of what we'll never need. Let me dig a hole, Nevermore we'll ever see. Reaching to the basket, I hear a gentle sigh, As I uncork a bottle And pour us a taste of wine. The candlelight within your eyes Shines just like the stars, I feed you with the love I have As I take away your scars. They say a kiss is just a kiss Unless a love's involved But my dear I seal upon your lips A promise to life's mystery solved. Fadedspirit 10/24/2008 |
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this has simply taken my breath away
Beautiful |
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Stunning!
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You sure have hit the right note Fade. Wondrously delicious !
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This one has left me speechless... very nice.
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LAMom, you never cease to bring a smile when ya visit. I'm glad you liked it.
Thanks DKW. Aww, thanks BonnyMiss. Awww, thanks Mystique. At times a heart speaks through the mind of a beholder and bears gifts to those who seek. |
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