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pkd1220
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Fri 10/24/08 05:15 PM
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Fine Lines
The line is fine Between love and hate Trust me, I relate And am now an expert But I guess not well On knowing the end Result of this union Does not add up to two So get on my shoes Kicked yet again I don't bounce Quite as well Deflated, Permeated, Frustrated We mated yet again Elated, Sated, You relegate Me to the side Short ride Blindsided by me My failure to see You clearly had shown Sown and never grown Into the words You master as you Lovingly wrap me, strap me Back to your heart Revived, I strived To beat the odds But your game The same, the blame Is mine, too kind Rewind my mind I thought you were The best ever As I now sever My ties with you Cold and blue Your lies, surprise As I try to walk the walk My words ring true I bid adeiu And don't, and won't Fall back again The light I've seen Your mean- replaced Can't deface The view I see In the beauty Of me. |
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L O V E is on your side
http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=7726610 |
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Pheeew ! *Let's out a very long whistle*. This is good stuff. Your words told of courage even in the face of adversity......................... I know why the caged bird sings
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Wow Pam, you wrote your first rap song...I like it I like it.
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To be hurt and lied to.
Is to be human, and it's just wrong. But then again, wolf's right. THIS would make a cool rap song. All men DON'T LIE.
But the ones that do, hurt all that don't. I hope you find peace with-in, and live for all your tomorrow's.  
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flowerforyou:
Miss Kim- always supportive
Sara89- nice to meet you
transientmind- thanks
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Wonderful pkd
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L O V E is on your side
http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=7726610 Yes, love is on my side, inside, outside and yes,sometimes bumpy ride. Thanks Harold 
...but I couldn't see the photo 
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Pheeew ! *Let's out a very long whistle*. This is good stuff. Your words told of courage even in the face of adversity......................... I know why the caged bird sings Your comments mean a lot BonnyMiss. Wonderful day to you
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loooooooooonnnnnnngggggggggggggg sighhhhhhhhhhhhh
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Wow Pam, you wrote your first rap song...I like it I like it. [/quote Rap-now I never thought of that but why not?   |
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Wow. Excellent write P; intense, full of clarity and strength, wonderful flow. You go girl!
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To be hurt and lied to.
Is to be human, and it's just wrong. But then again, wolf's right. THIS would make a cool rap song. All men DON'T LIE.
But the ones that do, hurt all that don't. I hope you find peace with-in, and live for all your tomorrow's.
Terry- thanks much for the kindness
Tomorrow is another day I will again- find my way What I want, of that I'm sure A man whose spirit is true and pure |
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johncarl-love the cat picture-that's how I intend to spend my day
thanks animalcracker
ArtGurl- letting out a deep breath-thanks
(((J))) thanks for the support-your friendship means much to me
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Your Beauty is deep and overflows
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Your Beauty is deep and overflows
thanks (((D))) from someone with such a beautiful soul.
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