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Topic: “Life’s Puzzle”
TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76436	Tue 10/21/08 12:51 PM
“Life’s Puzzle” Do you feel like you’re a puzzle? And you’re looking for that place to nuzzle. Just the right places that maybe you will fit. Do you feel at times you will not make it? You seem to bounce from place to place. And life seems like a big rat race. Makes you wonder is there really a spot. Or do you feel your giving it your last shot. Will this be the day you will squeeze in? Or will you just be left with your head in a spin. Around and round you will go. Will this merry-go round ever slow? Right when you think you have found your niche. It seems once again there has been a glitch. That place you thought was just right. After all, then you found out it was too tight. Making you feel as if you were out of breath. And you thought you had been put to death. So again you’re on a roll looking from place to place. As you look out among the crowds upon each face. Again another catches your eyes once more. And you wonder what is in store. Will it be that maybe this is the one. And finally your search will be done. K.L.M 10/21/2008 Inpired by a Wench I know

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Tue 10/21/08 12:57 PM
And very well done by a TxsGal I know.

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76436	Tue 10/21/08 01:04 PM
And very well done by a TxsGal I know. Lol at times I feel as if I'm on a roller coaster that never seems to stop then when it does I wish it would start going faster again.

MisKim323 Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 14563	Tue 10/21/08 01:08 PM


LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Tue 10/21/08 01:28 PM
your words always hit home,, I miss ya Love ya ((( Puddin Cup )))

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76436	Tue 10/21/08 02:28 PM
your words always hit home,, I miss ya Love ya ((( Puddin Cup ))) I miss ya more (((((((Buttercup)))))))

BonnyMiss Joined Thu 05/10/07 Posts: 15342	Tue 10/21/08 02:51 PM
Good Lord, I'm dizzy, ░████░█████░████░████ ░█░░░░░░█░░░█░░█░█░░█ ░████░░░█░░░█░░█░████ ░░░░█░░░█░░░█░░█░█░░░ ░████░░░█░░░████░█░░░ I want to get off !!!!! Another good one Txs

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76436	Wed 10/22/08 07:21 AM
Good Lord, I'm dizzy, ░████░█████░████░████ ░█░░░░░░█░░░█░░█░█░░█ ░████░░░█░░░█░░█░████ ░░░░█░░░█░░░█░░█░█░░░ ░████░░░█░░░████░█░░░ I want to get off !!!!! Another good one Txs Yeah okay do we ever get to get off?

BonnyMiss Joined Thu 05/10/07 Posts: 15342	Wed 10/22/08 07:22 AM
Good Lord, I'm dizzy, ░████░█████░████░████ ░█░░░░░░█░░░█░░█░█░░█ ░████░░░█░░░█░░█░████ ░░░░█░░░█░░░█░░█░█░░░ ░████░░░█░░░████░█░░░ I want to get off !!!!! Another good one Txs Yeah okay do we ever get to get off? No, but we could all hope

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Wed 10/22/08 07:42 AM
everyone take your places... now warmly greet everyone around you and introduce yourselves experience the joy of one another

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Wed 10/22/08 08:31 AM
everyone take your places... now warmly greet everyone around you and introduce yourselves experience the joy of one another keep your hands and feet inside the car at all times and Brrr-eeeee-athe..............

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Thu 10/23/08 05:03 AM
Great job (((K)))....so often your writes speak to the universal...

frankfk Joined Sun 09/24/06 Posts: 5684	Thu 10/23/08 05:10 AM
THE BEST SHOT IS ALWAYS AHEAD OF YOU, THERE IS NOTHING LIKE A LAST SHOT.

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Thu 10/23/08 08:36 AM
wonderful write Kristi

lovemaekar Joined Thu 10/04/07 Posts: 51	Tue 10/28/08 12:29 AM
Hey tex u sure put some facts here. Awesome poem

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76436	Tue 10/28/08 10:53 AM
Wow thought this one was buried thank each and everyone that took the time to read it. Seems at times we just can't find the place that we fit in at times whether it be love, family, friendships or life in General. We are left to wander as we search that special place that we feel we belong.