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A still figure clothed in gossamer
Freya surveys a crystal land before her Time, in a reliquary hangs from her waist preserving her kingdom and open space An empire now absent of occupants far removed from a land once beauteous Freya had Nesio as a suitor by her side On his leadership she had relied Seeking the heart of his Freya Nesio set out to please his leader and challenged the strength of Lister A cunning and mighty shape-shifter The head of Nesio Lister sought A battle, long and ardously fought Cunning pitted against will power To win, in this their shining hour Both knowing the prize at stake The hand of Freya was theirs to take The battle raged into the night A bloody bitter twisted fight Strength ebbed with approaching dawn No more reserves of manly brawn Broken and battered they laid on the ground Then Lister upon his craft he called Extra strength he cleverly found Slowly dying Lister raised a hand Nesio's head laid in the sand The kingdom was doomed, all was lost Freya now was paying the cost Her knight brave, loyal, had foreited And even in death was not defeated Freya bequeathed her heart to him This love, so pure, so true so genuine Her kingdom laid crumpled before her Love, life and destiny devoured Nesio fought bravely for his maid And with his life he dearly paid. 20.10.08 |
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Edited by
Noden
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Mon 10/20/08 02:47 PM
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 I applaud you my dear, genuinely beautiful! As yourself, thus my child you will rise again, to win this time from the years that thou hast gone...bravo, bravo.
  
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I applaud you my dear, genuinely beautiful! As yourself, thus my child you will rise again, to win this time from the years that thou hast gone...bravo, bravo.
Thank you so much sis. You to me are also a beautiful soul. Love and hugs  
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Very well done. I ended up finding more meaning in this for myself than you or I intended - a lil freaky, but much appreciated........
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I cannot think of a word to describe how brilliant this write is without using the word
brilliant because I'm not a brilliant word using kinda guy. Neither am I wonderful or spectacular word giver. MAGNIFICIENT? not me, not even. but, EXCELLENT, YES!
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Very well done. I ended up finding more meaning in this for myself than you or I intended - a lil freaky, but much appreciated........ DKW, I am glad that you did, thank you
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I cannot think of a word to describe how brilliant this write is without using the word brilliant because I'm not a brilliant word using kinda guy. Neither am I wonderful or spectacular word giver. MAGNIFICIENT? not me, not even. but, EXCELLENT, YES!
How about fandabidosy ? Thank you for reading my poem and leaving your comment, I enjoyed reading your feed back as much as I enjoyed writing the poem.
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Awesome write as always fighting the battle even if it means given up ones life just means the battle was worth fighting.
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Awesome write as always fighting the battle even if it means given up ones life just means the battle was worth fighting.
Honey you know it,there is a fighter in all of us one way or the other.Thank you for reading
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