Topic: Someone who can kiss
alonenotlonely's photo
Sun 10/12/08 03:13 AM

Help with a song I'm writing for my oldest daughter?

It is something along the line of, "The Kiss Remembers" I'd like to keep it vague just because my lyrics might limit someone else. Please pay attention, artista, is is "The Kiss Remembers . . . not . . . The Kiss Remembered."

'cause you know sometimes, not often enough, you get someone who can kiss - I mean, really make you roll your eyes back

and, when you do, you never forget it.

I mean you never forget it.

Even one-liners are welcome. I hope everyone can relate . . . I really hope you've had this.

michiganman3's photo
Sun 10/12/08 03:29 AM
All the good online poets are sleep.

Dreaming of that kiss, the one that I will always miss.
That starts with birthday joy, that ends up searing my heart.

southernmike's photo
Sun 10/12/08 04:04 AM
nm i am not song writer poems maybe but they dont have to sound right