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You're the first thought I had when I opened my eyes,
waking from a dream,waiting on the mornings sunrise, your smile warms my lonely heart,when I look at you, your kisses soft and sweet,as the first mornings dew, together we laugh and smile,each and every sunny day, telling each our tales,special in our own funny way, your dreams hold me tight,and this I'll never forget, I come to hold your heart,walking into our sunset... You're the first thought I had when I opened my eyes, you even turn a cloudy day into bright and sunny skies, you drive away the rain,forgetting all my pain, I send to you my love,upon a dreamy moonlit sky, giving all I'm worth,to hear your loving sigh, dreaming of our passion,in our sweet loving tries, you are the one in my heart,when I close my eyes... |
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Beautiful,,, Love is Incredible
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Thank You Lamom,it is love that inspires my muse of poetry.
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very beautiful
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Thank You Rarerose,
I have read some of your poems,you show talent but,geeze your poems make me want to cry. Lighten up,this is a dating site,not a hating site. |
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Well dont u think I know that....most of mine are happy...if you thumb
back a page or more you will see...I am usually a very happy person but sometimes your heart just needs to cry. |
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Just cry it out,it will be all better in the morning.
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not sure if any more crying will do any more good for me, even though I
know I probably will...but I am strong and will be just fine and on my merry way |
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tommorrow is another day,closer to the one you love.
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when you think of tommorrow,
the setting sun is your reply, when you dream of tommorrow, do you see me in your eyes, when you look upon my eyes, do you see the setting sun, will you hold me past tommorrow, and let me know that I'm the one? |
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I wrote this last part when I was in high school.
kinda thought it might fit here. |
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Who ever you wrote that for is very lucky to have found you , i'm sure
she is very much in love with you ,what a heart you have ( Beautiful) |
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I loved the poem Slowhands, I'm going to have to show it to my girl
later. Of course you'll get the credit, I don't tag or steal others art. |
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Thank You Slammin,I'm sure she knows how I feel!
sure Dane,you can show her just remember it's mine, but if she kisses you for it you can keep them for yourself. |
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hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
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Tneal,
hmmmmmmmmm what? |
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very nice poem slow...its so what i want in life..
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Thank You Buttons,
I hope you find what you are looking for. |
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