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A hundred times
I have dreamt of your arrival But a thousand awakenings is more than I need of truth All I need of my reality… When I was five They told me You were out there One day you would be mine and the world would never be the same At sixteen I was assured that I was still too young And had plenty of time Then twenty five Came and passed Again I was led to believe... Believe that we all get happy endings Believe that when it happens I would just…know But these are the same people who tricked me into believing in a jolly old man whose sole purpose is to deliver toys to all the good little boys and girls of the world How cruel a thing to do to children How harsh a seed to plant into the heart of abundant hope I understand it is the spirit of the season Not the red suit So I have waited Each departing year as cold as the one before… Tonight the moon looked close enough to touch The air was a little different this week The squirrels a little busier Soon, even the leaves will explode with a colorful voice Only to fall in a violent Silent protest In vain Oh god, I can’t take another winter here kc08 |
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The first thought that came to mind when I read this was
Get your Assssss home,, Yet I know not that easy I can say as the Season's change look deep within Believe in the ever after Believe in your dreams and take a giant leap,, and Believe |
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Edited by
kc0003
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Mon 10/06/08 09:15 PM
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The first thought that came to mind when I read this was Get your Assssss home,, Yet I know not that easy I can say as the Season's change look deep within Believe in the ever after Believe in your dreams and take a giant leap,, and Believe oh you...i will find my way back to LA one day... find comfort that this is just an exercise...i had a line that i wanted to use "How harsh a seed to plant into the heart of abundant hope" so i tried... hey, they can't all be great or i would get paid to do this... |
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The first thought that came to mind when I read this was Get your Assssss home,, Yet I know not that easy I can say as the Season's change look deep within Believe in the ever after Believe in your dreams and take a giant leap,, and Believe oh you...i will find my way back to LA one day... find comfort that this is just an exercise...i had a line that i wanted to use "How harsh a seed to plant into the heart of abundant hope" so i tried... hey, they can't all be great or i would get paid to do this... Well the thought process worked,, An Incredible write as usual,, would not expect anything less,, As for coming homeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee One Day its so not nice to make mom mad |
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Excellent write my friend.
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The first thought that came to mind when I read this was Get your Assssss home,, Yet I know not that easy I can say as the Season's change look deep within Believe in the ever after Believe in your dreams and take a giant leap,, and Believe oh you...i will find my way back to LA one day... find comfort that this is just an exercise...i had a line that i wanted to use "How harsh a seed to plant into the heart of abundant hope" so i tried... hey, they can't all be great or i would get paid to do this... Well the thought process worked,, An Incredible write as usual,, would not expect anything less,, As for coming homeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee One Day its so not nice to make mom mad i wouldnt dream of it |
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Excellent write my friend. thank you faded...nice of you to drop in |
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The first thought that came to mind when I read this was Get your Assssss home,, Yet I know not that easy I can say as the Season's change look deep within Believe in the ever after Believe in your dreams and take a giant leap,, and Believe oh you...i will find my way back to LA one day... find comfort that this is just an exercise...i had a line that i wanted to use "How harsh a seed to plant into the heart of abundant hope" so i tried... hey, they can't all be great or i would get paid to do this... Well the thought process worked,, An Incredible write as usual,, would not expect anything less,, As for coming homeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee One Day its so not nice to make mom mad i wouldnt dream of it Hmmmmmmmmm Angel,, let me ponder that |
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Edited by
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Mon 10/06/08 09:37 PM
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The first thought that came to mind when I read this was Get your Assssss home,, Yet I know not that easy I can say as the Season's change look deep within Believe in the ever after Believe in your dreams and take a giant leap,, and Believe oh you...i will find my way back to LA one day... find comfort that this is just an exercise...i had a line that i wanted to use "How harsh a seed to plant into the heart of abundant hope" so i tried... hey, they can't all be great or i would get paid to do this... Well the thought process worked,, An Incredible write as usual,, would not expect anything less,, As for coming homeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee One Day its so not nice to make mom mad i wouldnt dream of it Hmmmmmmmmm Angel,, let me ponder that ----- _______ that better? |
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The first thought that came to mind when I read this was Get your Assssss home,, Yet I know not that easy I can say as the Season's change look deep within Believe in the ever after Believe in your dreams and take a giant leap,, and Believe oh you...i will find my way back to LA one day... find comfort that this is just an exercise...i had a line that i wanted to use "How harsh a seed to plant into the heart of abundant hope" so i tried... hey, they can't all be great or i would get paid to do this... Well the thought process worked,, An Incredible write as usual,, would not expect anything less,, As for coming homeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee One Day its so not nice to make mom mad i wouldnt dream of it Hmmmmmmmmm Angel,, let me ponder that ----- _______ that better? An Angel with a Devilish side,, Yaaaaaaaaaaa I like |
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A hundred times I have dreamt of your arrival But a thousand awakenings is more than I need of truth All I need of my reality… When I was five They told me You were out there One day you would be mine and the world would never be the same At sixteen I was assured that I was still too young And had plenty of time Then twenty five Came and passed Again I was led to believe... Believe that we all get happy endings Believe that when it happens I would just…know But these are the same people who tricked me into believing in a jolly old man whose sole purpose is to deliver toys to all the good little boys and girls of the world How cruel a thing to do to children How harsh a seed to plant into the heart of abundant hope I understand it is the spirit of the season Not the red suit So I have waited Each departing year as cold as the one before… Tonight the moon looked close enough to touch The air was a little different this week The squirrels a little busier Soon, even the leaves will explode with a colorful voice Only to fall in a violent Silent protest In vain Oh god, I can’t take another winter here kc08 Flawless. |
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A hundred times I have dreamt of your arrival But a thousand awakenings is more than I need of truth All I need of my reality… When I was five They told me You were out there One day you would be mine and the world would never be the same At sixteen I was assured that I was still too young And had plenty of time Then twenty five Came and passed Again I was led to believe... Believe that we all get happy endings Believe that when it happens I would just…know But these are the same people who tricked me into believing in a jolly old man whose sole purpose is to deliver toys to all the good little boys and girls of the world How cruel a thing to do to children How harsh a seed to plant into the heart of abundant hope I understand it is the spirit of the season Not the red suit So I have waited Each departing year as cold as the one before… Tonight the moon looked close enough to touch The air was a little different this week The squirrels a little busier Soon, even the leaves will explode with a colorful voice Only to fall in a violent Silent protest In vain Oh god, I can’t take another winter here kc08 Flawless. thank you but, but how did you like the write... |
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KC, good write. I would say to someone who said this to me. Look deep inside yourself for the answer here. Are you expecting a fairy tale that is not possible or do you not love yourself enough to allow love in?
Anyway, great work |
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KC, good write. I would say to someone who said this to me. Look deep inside yourself for the answer here. Are you expecting a fairy tale that is not possible or do you not love yourself enough to allow love in? Anyway, great work thank you dragoness...this is just a write nothing more nothing less... |
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KC, good write. I would say to someone who said this to me. Look deep inside yourself for the answer here. Are you expecting a fairy tale that is not possible or do you not love yourself enough to allow love in? Anyway, great work thank you dragoness...this is just a write nothing more nothing less... Your very welcome |
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Just a write my butt. True you glean much from imagination or hmmmm what if's and possibilities, but "just a write". Do pardon me while I scoff.........
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that was a very nice write kc
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Perfection!
Poignant, beautiful, human, alive. |
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Just a write my butt. True you glean much from imagination or hmmmm what if's and possibilities, but "just a write". Do pardon me while I scoff......... scoff all you want to i will take it as a compliment...thank you |
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that was a very nice write kc thank you mr numbers |
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