You Within Me

I am baptized in the pool
Of your beauty's radiant grace,
And lifted by your soul,
Subdued by your loving gaze.

The very heart you give
Has given to me life,
Upon your wings of mercy,
I've been taken to new heights.

Belittled in your presence,
A goddess you may seem,
Nothing less than you
Could shake this heart of me.

To touch your hand so deftly
Could burn me to an ash,
To hear your whispered words
Could cure me in a flash.

Though I'm just a shadow
Of what I see in you,
My darling you're immortal,
And I shall never do.

Fadedspirit 10/5/2008

good to see you back in form,..

beautiful

lovely

Wonderful

Awww, thanks May, you're a sweetheart.

Thanks ArtGurl.

Thanks MisKim.

Methinks this deserves a deeper look within the glass in which you peer (hmmm, did I spell that right?). Immortality? New form, new shape, new outer shell, the growing immortal within? Only time will tell. Sorry, promoted a bit O'rambling on my part...........

Thanks DKW. You call it rambling, I call it thinking out loud. hee hee

Woohoo she's back. My #1 fan is back....hee hee
Thanks for visiting shauna. I kinda missed ya.

nicely done my friend

great ending to this one

Thanks kc, always nice to see ya drop in friend.