Topic: betrayl
sara89's photo
Sun 10/05/08 03:51 PM
what an ugly word
to rear its head
in any i had thought so dear
reading like a dirty novel
the passerbys stare in a sense of awe

like an angry lynch mob
seeing their last victem, head on a pike
it seems surreal

by word or deed
no matter where its delt
it lands stright to the heart

yes,betrayl
whispered in a hushed voice
it still sounds like a scream
remembered for eternity

MirrorMirror's photo
Sun 10/05/08 04:00 PM
niceflowerforyou

s1owhand's photo
Sun 10/05/08 04:48 PM
flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Sun 10/05/08 04:50 PM
flowerforyou

BrooklineBaby's photo
Sun 10/05/08 04:59 PM
Beautiful write - to be betrayed is such an ugly, heart - wrenching thing, and you've described it so perfectly......flowerforyou