Topic: when you make me happy
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Sat 10/04/08 09:26 AM
im thinkin bout your pants
my face against your lap
quietly you are so
i continue
when im thinkin bout your arms
hands follow
fall and grace me so
then im thinkin bout your
face that i am not facing so
i dont need to check or speak
i'm thinking that the pleasures mine
we have written every place
for the other
intentionally so
you keep giving to me
my satisfaction


jnbuglady's photo
Sat 10/04/08 09:27 AM
Wow, really, really good, thanks!

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Sat 10/04/08 09:45 AM
one word- infatuated. Great write akoflowerforyou flowerforyou

AngelLight's photo
Sat 10/04/08 09:46 AM
Ty for your write...

You are very talented....I love "when im thinkin bout your arms
hands follow
fall and grace me so"

flowers :heart: :heart:

LAMom's photo
Sat 10/04/08 10:35 AM
flowers :heart:

I got a big ole smile on my face when I read this write,,

d4tc's photo
Sat 10/04/08 11:01 AM
I sat
as a faction
two belong to
get her

In secure
the cure
is secure

Only sitting
shifting
lifting up
a halfpipe smile
b the way to
c the alpha
bet magnets
are not mean't for the table
The horinzotalness of it all

jaded be the jagged who's lines
resemble stairs
to the basement
from the attic


I am

an addict

I stand
I sit down
I stand up

I punch lines
to break ice


I grope like a man on a mistress
and not his wife

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Sat 10/04/08 11:33 AM
there may be nothing better than a good shower of appreciationflowerforyou

dear friends and loversbigsmile

i love the mistress-wife J

punching lines d4

to breaksmokin


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Sat 10/04/08 11:34 AM
drinker :heart:

d4tc's photo
Sat 10/04/08 01:12 PM
Edited by d4tc on Sat 10/04/08 01:13 PM
Fun ware
under where
lacey rims
show stringy thins
strapped in
laughin
factory outlets
a socket
to jab
the rum bowl
the rum in the bowl
the bowl
the win!

a bloodbath
so sacred
the indians
so brave
tiger bites
invisible scars
Zebra stripes
marred
kinky
is the
index + middle + pinky
that last one for the stinky

oh forgive me
I'm getting carried away
by your winds
that wash my clothes dry clean

those clothes being hope

that hope

being alive

being left-handed
not understimated
the rocky-right

Armwrestling myself
to see which of me
wins the fight

Then
there is you

There
that is light





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Sat 10/04/08 01:40 PM
i follow that

thank youbigsmile

(((((d4tc)))))

:heart:

clean hope is light, i give it back to you

and hold it too

:heart: :heart:



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Sat 10/04/08 04:20 PM

im thinkin bout your pants
my face against your lap
quietly you are so
i continue
when im thinkin bout your arms
hands follow
fall and grace me so
then im thinkin bout your
face that i am not facing so
i dont need to check or speak
i'm thinking that the pleasures mine
we have written every place
for the other
intentionally so
you keep giving to me
my satisfaction




A touching moment laid out by touching and visually beautiful words :heart:

no photo
Sat 10/04/08 07:54 PM
ms wiz (curtsey smiley)flowerforyou

i'm into a man, it is beautiful and assuring touching moving:heart:

LAMom's photo
Sat 10/04/08 08:11 PM

ms wiz (curtsey smiley)flowerforyou

i'm into a man, it is beautiful and assuring touching moving:heart:


Yes you are, its like having that cuddly feeling all over again and again,,