Topic: A Last Breath
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Fri 10/03/08 11:50 AM
As she takes the very last pill
Begins to drift into sleep
She knows that she's going to hell
But prays that her soul God keeps

Turmoil throughout her childhood
The beatings, harsh words, the tears
Continuing in each moment in life
The only way to erase those years

Darkness and demons have brought her here
Tainted her heart with gloom
Barely aware at this point
A message from the other room

"Momma, it's a girl!
Come visit for awhile,
Such a beauty
Please hurry, please come."

She begs the Lord to give her breath to this child
And asks..."Dear God...What have I done?"


KLS 10-03-08


AngelLight's photo
Fri 10/03/08 11:58 AM
Wow. Very intense and poignant.

All people have a story that tells how they got from point A to point Z....

May no person judge another...:heart:

Havaman's photo
Fri 10/03/08 12:03 PM
:cry: I lost a family member to suicide this year...this touched me deeply....I wish he could have seen what he was doing before hand....flowerforyou Life is the most precious gift!

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Fri 10/03/08 12:05 PM

Wow. Very intense and poignant.

All people have a story that tells how they got from point A to point Z....

May no person judge another...:heart:
{{{{{ Thank you }}}}}

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Fri 10/03/08 12:06 PM

:cry: I lost a family member to suicide this year...this touched me deeply....I wish he could have seen what he was doing before hand....flowerforyou Life is the most precious gift!

So sorry to hear that Sweety.:cry: :cry: :cry:

Havaman's photo
Fri 10/03/08 12:08 PM

Wow. Very intense and poignant.

All people have a story that tells how they got from point A to point Z....

May no person judge another...:heart:

i could not agree more!
When we stop judging.... or even catch our selves doing so and know ..its not the thing to do...we find ourselves in the better light of understanding!

AngelLight's photo
Fri 10/03/08 12:11 PM
Edited by AngelLight on Fri 10/03/08 12:15 PM

:cry: I lost a family member to suicide this year...this touched me deeply....I wish he could have seen what he was doing before hand....flowerforyou Life is the most precious gift!





I too am very sorry to hear of your loss....

May you have all you need to know peace :heart:

Yes, Hav, I just read your additional post. Ty for sharing these thoughts! :heart: