Community > Poems & Creative Writing

Previous 1 2 Next

Topic: She Cried
LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Thu 10/02/08 02:44 PM
She cried today Cleansing her Soul Whispers fade of long ago Stain filled cheeks Taking control Releasing the anger once plagued shell Shadowed darkness shines a light Worthy is her stained glass mirror Peace of mind is all she seeks Within the darkness thoughts unfold Cleansing her Heart & Soul once more Within the night the calm released She She Cried.....

LexFonteyne Joined Thu 12/07/06 Posts: 32131	Thu 10/02/08 02:48 PM
((((((((((DENISE)))))))))) Absolutely beautiful.

BrooklineBaby Joined Sun 04/27/08 Posts: 469	Thu 10/02/08 02:49 PM
She cried today Cleansing her Soul Whispers fade of long ago Stain filled cheeks Taking control Releasing the anger once plagued shell Shadowed darkness shines a light Worthy is her stained glass mirror Peace of mind is all she seeks Within the darkness thoughts unfold Cleansing her Heart & Soul once more Within the night the calm released She She Cried..... LAMom - That was so very beautiful. It reaches the deepest recesses of the soul......Absolutely incredible...

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Thu 10/02/08 02:50 PM
((((((((((DENISE)))))))))) Absolutely beautiful. Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Hello you,, thank you Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm while I got ya here,, Is book #2 out yet,,,

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Thu 10/02/08 02:51 PM
She cried today Cleansing her Soul Whispers fade of long ago Stain filled cheeks Taking control Releasing the anger once plagued shell Shadowed darkness shines a light Worthy is her stained glass mirror Peace of mind is all she seeks Within the darkness thoughts unfold Cleansing her Heart & Soul once more Within the night the calm released She She Cried..... LAMom - That was so very beautiful. It reaches the deepest recesses of the soul......Absolutely incredible... You are such a ray of light your kindness ohhhhhh so pure thank you

Redsoxfan1 Joined Sat 12/29/07 Posts: 8388	Thu 10/02/08 02:56 PM
That is a beautiful write!! I love that!! Thank you!!

Pete026 Joined Sun 10/14/07 Posts: 14799	Thu 10/02/08 02:58 PM
Wonderful

LexFonteyne Joined Thu 12/07/06 Posts: 32131	Thu 10/02/08 02:58 PM
((((((((((DENISE)))))))))) Absolutely beautiful. Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Hello you,, thank you Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm while I got ya here,, Is book #2 out yet,,, Not yet -- we're doing some last-minute alterations to the cover -- but very soon now....!

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Thu 10/02/08 02:59 PM
((((((((((DENISE)))))))))) Absolutely beautiful. Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Hello you,, thank you Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm while I got ya here,, Is book #2 out yet,,, Not yet -- we're doing some last-minute alterations to the cover -- but very soon now....! Whooooooooooooooooooo cant wait,, Red & Pete thank you so very much From me to you

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Thu 10/02/08 06:16 PM
Allow me to wipe away those tears. That was beautiful Dee...loved it as I do you.

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Thu 10/02/08 06:16 PM
Denise- very heartfelt and beautiful in the quiet of the night the clarity begins, her vision much clearer now

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76436	Thu 10/02/08 06:54 PM
At times we must let the tears flow in order to welcome the calm that will soon follow.

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Thu 10/02/08 06:58 PM
At times we must let the tears flow in order to welcome the calm that will soon follow. Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh so very true the calm is here and the view is clear,,, (( Kristi, Robert, Pam ))) Life is ,, well just is and I move forward no regrets its nice finding the calm again

ArtGurl Joined Sun 04/08/07 Posts: 17722	Thu 10/02/08 07:01 PM
oh beauty I so dislike crying yet Michael is always delighted when I do ... ....errr wait that came out wrong ... uhhh sorry honey What he means is that he is pleased that I am letting go and no longer fighting so hard to keep it all in ... ...tears ... cleansing and replenishing ... Beautiful!

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Thu 10/02/08 07:03 PM
oh beauty I so dislike crying yet Michael is always delighted when I do ... ....errr wait that came out wrong ... uhhh sorry honey What he means is that he is pleased that I am letting go and no longer fighting so hard to keep it all in ... ...tears ... cleansing and replenishing ... Beautiful! Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Angel I understood and Michael is right,,,, Cleansing and replenishing has brought me many new insights on my journey in life Letting go makes the road ahead much smoother Hugs to you

ArtGurl Joined Sun 04/08/07 Posts: 17722	Thu 10/02/08 08:03 PM
oh beauty I so dislike crying yet Michael is always delighted when I do ... ....errr wait that came out wrong ... uhhh sorry honey What he means is that he is pleased that I am letting go and no longer fighting so hard to keep it all in ... ...tears ... cleansing and replenishing ... Beautiful! Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Angel I understood and Michael is right,,,, Cleansing and replenishing has brought me many new insights on my journey in life Letting go makes the road ahead much smoother Hugs to you You would take HIS side ... I know it is a good thing ... It is just the ease of letting go ... my mind is willing but sometimes my knuckles are white from squeezing so tight ...

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Thu 10/02/08 08:58 PM
oh beauty I so dislike crying yet Michael is always delighted when I do ... ....errr wait that came out wrong ... uhhh sorry honey What he means is that he is pleased that I am letting go and no longer fighting so hard to keep it all in ... ...tears ... cleansing and replenishing ... Beautiful! Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Angel I understood and Michael is right,,,, Cleansing and replenishing has brought me many new insights on my journey in life Letting go makes the road ahead much smoother Hugs to you You would take HIS side ... I know it is a good thing ... It is just the ease of letting go ... my mind is willing but sometimes my knuckles are white from squeezing so tight ... Hes a wise one this you know,, Ohhhhhhh release the knuckles I've learned when we let go and the blood flows once again the skin sheds and then we can comfortably fit into the skin that we were ment to be in,,

ArtGurl Joined Sun 04/08/07 Posts: 17722	Thu 10/02/08 09:39 PM
oh beauty I so dislike crying yet Michael is always delighted when I do ... ....errr wait that came out wrong ... uhhh sorry honey What he means is that he is pleased that I am letting go and no longer fighting so hard to keep it all in ... ...tears ... cleansing and replenishing ... Beautiful! Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Angel I understood and Michael is right,,,, Cleansing and replenishing has brought me many new insights on my journey in life Letting go makes the road ahead much smoother Hugs to you You would take HIS side ... I know it is a good thing ... It is just the ease of letting go ... my mind is willing but sometimes my knuckles are white from squeezing so tight ... Hes a wise one this you know,, Ohhhhhhh release the knuckles I've learned when we let go and the blood flows once again the skin sheds and then we can comfortably fit into the skin that we were ment to be in,, A wise one huh? He doesn't think I can save the world ... I think he just hasn't got the memo yet ... okay okay ... working on letting go of what I cannot change ... but I am not happy about it ... Good night lovely!

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Thu 10/02/08 09:41 PM
oh beauty I so dislike crying yet Michael is always delighted when I do ... ....errr wait that came out wrong ... uhhh sorry honey What he means is that he is pleased that I am letting go and no longer fighting so hard to keep it all in ... ...tears ... cleansing and replenishing ... Beautiful! Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Angel I understood and Michael is right,,,, Cleansing and replenishing has brought me many new insights on my journey in life Letting go makes the road ahead much smoother Hugs to you You would take HIS side ... I know it is a good thing ... It is just the ease of letting go ... my mind is willing but sometimes my knuckles are white from squeezing so tight ... Hes a wise one this you know,, Ohhhhhhh release the knuckles I've learned when we let go and the blood flows once again the skin sheds and then we can comfortably fit into the skin that we were ment to be in,, A wise one huh? He doesn't think I can save the world ... I think he just hasn't got the memo yet ... okay okay ... working on letting go of what I cannot change ... but I am not happy about it ... Good night lovely! I'll make sure he gets the Memo Lovely you ,, You have a blessed night Sleep well

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Thu 10/02/08 10:05 PM
She cried today Cleansing her Soul Whispers fade of long ago Stain filled cheeks Taking control Releasing the anger once plagued shell Shadowed darkness shines a light Worthy is her stained glass mirror Peace of mind is all she seeks Within the darkness thoughts unfold Cleansing her Heart & Soul once more Within the night the calm released She She Cried..... "Worthy is her stained glass mirror..." Lovely ....