Topic: The Love Of All | |
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Tiny tuffet of fur
Nibbling cautiously Prancing round the yard Beneath an apple tree Skiers racing fast Dashing to and fro Autumn shows her head Tiarraed trees all in a row Waves crashing to the shore Smell of pine and soap Drawing closer to you A together tug of rope In your silence I escape To a deck where we now stand Sipping wine in the calm of night Standing together hand in hand Somethings never change Nature's orchestra abound Laughter echoes, a starlit lake The love of all that does surround SDF 9/30/08 |
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very nice keep it up
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Fahlicious... I'll try. Have a nice night!
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That was a great write. You are truly gifted
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Mystique, you paint such delightful pictures with your words
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Love fills you,, Breathe's with you,
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very nice Mystique
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pkd... thank you!
LaMom... and yes it does fill you! Bonny... nice seeing ya here! Hugs flame... thank you very much |
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This feels like a deep breath on a cool night
Lovely! |
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Excellent write. I liked the mood and flow very much.
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((lurchs)) Indeed and thank you! Have a great day.
((faded)) Thank you and have a great day or night as well! |
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