Topic: Ocean themed loved song (opinions welcome)
ThelittleMiss's photo
Mon 09/29/08 12:41 PM

you and i were meant to be

like the ocean to the beach

and i wonder pensively

when it is that you will see

that like the island that i love

something sent from above

and my thoughts consist of

wondering if its real



I wanna ride your waves

delicate gracefull

stay out for days

i wanna surf your tide

ripping current

take me away

I wanna float in your ocean

move side to side

in the depth of your seas

take me away

I wont feel it pull

take me away

untill im underneath

oh darling



you and i go very well

like the sand upon the shell

with time im sure you’ll tell

like the thoughts inside my head

that we were meant to be together

and the story says she’ll love you if let her

like romeo and juliet but only for forever

and i’d rather have that instead



I wanna ride your waves

delicate gracefull

stay out for days

i wanna surf your tide

ripping current

take me away

I wanna float in your ocean

move side to side

in the depth of your seas

take me away

I wont feel it pull

take me away

untill im underneath

purposebuilt's photo
Mon 09/29/08 12:46 PM
You have feeling in what you write. Good stuff!