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Topic: The Water
AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Fri 09/26/08 12:19 AM Edited by AngelLight on Fri 09/26/08 12:21 AM
So unexpectedly you came to me. You help me feel at ease with my heart fully open and unafraid. But, that’s just your way. And I am amazed at every word you speak for you place me on the brink of falling into the heart of your heart. Oh let me fall, for within you I am caught in the arms of true Love, and Love is what it’s all about; it’s what we’re all about. As you stand before me, I am filled with grace in the gentle and quiet space of Love’s joyful revelation. You move me beyond elation. You show me creation. You engage me in celebration, and in the contemplation that resides within meditation. And I now know transformation. With no obligation or reservation, I am yours. Yes, you opened the doors. My faith is restored. There is nothing more I need, for you are the water and I the seed. JDS 09/26/2008

Myrrdin Joined Sat 08/25/07 Posts: 540	Fri 09/26/08 12:41 AM
very beautiful, good luck in finding it if you haven't already. I'm still searching but hopeful

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Fri 09/26/08 01:31 AM
"You move me beyond elation. You show me creation. You engage me in celebration, and in the contemplation that resides within meditation. And I now know transformation." HOT STUFF!

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Fri 09/26/08 02:19 AM
aren't surprises great?

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Fri 09/26/08 02:23 AM
"i like that"

Bobbie419 Joined Wed 02/13/08 Posts: 146	Fri 09/26/08 03:43 AM
I love creative writing n poems but cant put 2 words together.. Good read folks !

flame1cutie Joined Thu 04/24/08 Posts: 7307	Fri 09/26/08 04:04 AM
Awesome write

liltazz Joined Tue 07/29/08 Posts: 217	Fri 09/26/08 04:09 AM
That was awesome! Thanks for sharing.

Unknow Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 1972	Fri 09/26/08 04:31 AM
Good news AngelLight! great write

Mystique42 Joined Thu 04/12/07 Posts: 5045	Fri 09/26/08 04:48 AM
Angel... very nice. "You are the water and I the seed" ...loved that.

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Fri 09/26/08 08:20 AM
Angel Ohhhhhhhhhhh Angel Beautiful as ever I have missed you and your soul upon these pages Your smile is breathtaking it flows so gently accross these pages,,

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Fri 09/26/08 01:47 PM
very beautiful, good luck in finding it if you haven't already. I'm still searching but hopeful Ty Myrrdin. Yes, remain hopeful!

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Fri 09/26/08 01:51 PM
"You move me beyond elation. You show me creation. You engage me in celebration, and in the contemplation that resides within meditation. And I now know transformation." HOT STUFF! LOL, thank you Sweet J,

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Fri 09/26/08 01:52 PM
aren't surprises great? They are absolutely wonderful (((P)))....Ty for the flowers ....

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Fri 09/26/08 01:53 PM
"i like that" [/quote (((H)))....thanks bunches

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Fri 09/26/08 01:53 PM
I love creative writing n poems but cant put 2 words together.. Good read folks ! Ty Bobbie...it's nice to meet you

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Fri 09/26/08 01:54 PM
Awesome write Big kiss flame....Ty for the lovely compliment.

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Fri 09/26/08 01:55 PM
That was awesome! Thanks for sharing. You're welcome lilt...Ty for reading and commenting!

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Fri 09/26/08 01:57 PM
Good news AngelLight! great write 1000, so good to see you ....ty so very much

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Fri 09/26/08 01:58 PM
Angel... very nice. "You are the water and I the seed" ...loved that. I appreciate that Mystique, ty...