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In Silence
There he sits In that darned ol rockin chair, Never sees a thing Just sits there with a stare. You don't know he's watchin From deep inside his heart. He knows you'll be judging Because that's what you are. You never seen the tears He's shed with all the pain, But look at who you are And to whom you cast your blame. You think he's weak and feeble, You believe he's all dried up. Well look inside yourself, Unknowing little pup. He don't care to know, What about you are. All he wanted was a friend, But you carried that too far. You crushed the heart he offered, You tore his gift in two, Yet right there he rocks, Not even mad at you. Those tears you see that fall, Those ones you just can't feel, Can't you see he's crying, Because it's you, You kill. Fadedspirit 9/23/2008 |
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nice write faded one
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Emotionally intense..very well written fadedspirit
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well done faded
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Ohhh, I love it, love it, love it when you get informative on growth. Most excellent........
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Very good as always
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Thanks kc.
Thanks Cavatica. I'm glad you enjoyed. Thanks pkd. Awww, thanks DKW. Thanks TxsGal. |
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no prob...
it was nicely done |
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Ohhhhhhhhhhhh pure emotion from one yet not heard
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Certainly intense, but a well done write!
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Ahh yes LAMom, I often find it perplexing when people don't hear the words of silence. Thanks.
Thank you Mystique, I'm glad you enjoyed. |
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good as always x
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Thanks again shauna.
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