Topic: In Silence
Fadedspirit's photo
Tue 09/23/08 06:50 PM
In Silence

There he sits
In that darned ol rockin chair,
Never sees a thing
Just sits there with a stare.

You don't know he's watchin
From deep inside his heart.
He knows you'll be judging
Because that's what you are.

You never seen the tears
He's shed with all the pain,
But look at who you are
And to whom you cast your blame.

You think he's weak and feeble,
You believe he's all dried up.
Well look inside yourself,
Unknowing little pup.

He don't care to know,
What about you are.
All he wanted was a friend,
But you carried that too far.

You crushed the heart he offered,
You tore his gift in two,
Yet right there he rocks,
Not even mad at you.

Those tears you see that fall,
Those ones you just can't feel,
Can't you see he's crying,
Because it's you,
You kill.

Fadedspirit 9/23/2008

kc0003's photo
Tue 09/23/08 07:06 PM
nice write faded one


no photo
Tue 09/23/08 07:41 PM
Emotionally intense..very well written fadedspirit

no photo
Tue 09/23/08 07:45 PM
well done faded:smile: flowerforyou

Differentkindofwench's photo
Wed 09/24/08 07:02 AM
Ohhh, I love it, love it, love it when you get informative on growth. Most excellent........

TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 09/24/08 11:55 AM
Very good as always flowerforyou

Fadedspirit's photo
Fri 09/26/08 08:02 PM
Thanks kc. :smile:

Thanks Cavatica. I'm glad you enjoyed.:smile:

Thanks pkd. :smile:

Awww, thanks DKW. :smile:

Thanks TxsGal. :smile:


kc0003's photo
Fri 09/26/08 08:04 PM
no prob...

it was nicely done

LAMom's photo
Fri 09/26/08 08:28 PM
Ohhhhhhhhhhhh pure emotion from one yet not heard

flowers flowers

Mystique42's photo
Sat 09/27/08 05:52 AM
Certainly intense, but a well done write! flowerforyou

Fadedspirit's photo
Sat 09/27/08 08:56 PM
Ahh yes LAMom, I often find it perplexing when people don't hear the words of silence. Thanks. flowerforyou


Thank you Mystique, I'm glad you enjoyed. flowerforyou :smile:

shauna22's photo
Mon 10/06/08 01:36 PM
good as always x

Fadedspirit's photo
Mon 10/06/08 08:28 PM
Thanks again shauna. :smile: