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Topic: elephants
DirkGently Joined Sun 06/22/08 Posts: 1252	Mon 09/22/08 05:53 AM
understated complications surrounded by noise still trying to build a shelter in traffic still trying to find calm in unbridled cacophany ignoring the elephants in the room though one is standing on my toe and won't get off trying to make things easier, but they get harder get heavier demand more attention shouldn't have fed them in the first place

heathersaysgobucks Joined Sun 01/06/08 Posts: 5306	Mon 09/22/08 05:58 AM
Bravo!

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Mon 09/22/08 07:48 AM
Agreed, well done!

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Mon 09/22/08 07:52 AM
loved it!!

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76471	Mon 09/22/08 07:54 AM
Seems with some problems the more you tend to feed to them the bigger they get. Got to cut them off and head them off at the pass.

DirkGently Joined Sun 06/22/08 Posts: 1252	Mon 09/22/08 08:33 AM
thanks all, now please excuse me, i have to go kick some gray wrinkled butts...

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Mon 09/22/08 05:47 PM
At least they are'nt pink! Quick hide the peanuts!!!

DirkGently Joined Sun 06/22/08 Posts: 1252	Tue 09/23/08 01:02 AM

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