Topic: Twenty One!
d4tc's photo
Sun 09/21/08 09:37 AM
What a night!

it was like a bonfire
surrounded by ice sculptures

some spitfires

new sounds
new moves
old sounds
old moves

everyone shuffling
feet like cards
different hands around the room

outdoors
just the same

I was in the middle
over the edge
on the flip
under a rip
tidal wave
sloshing
splurging on my consumption
as my 4th leg resembled the all mighty tap

Keg pumping;

one
two
three
four
five

5 times being key

pump
pump
pump
pump
pump

Just when you hear the air
start to tighten
thats when you'll notice a good squirt
comming out
and were not talking about
the squirt in the yellow can
but the yellow squirt in the por
cel
ian approaching

Whahair
fuzz grows
and words become mold
blurred between the lines for the most part
to a sober log
yet their was not a log
to sand down it's bump
with plenty of grain to go against
there could have been

Sober? Who? Tell me.
Who was sober to drive safe?
I don't believe you
and speaking of defective logs
there was neither
even the wallflowers
were watered

everyone knew someone

and if you didn't know anyone
someone would introduce you

It was like that
all over the place

The out of costume
in character cheerleaders
in their squads
rallying pep talks
about what else?
Sex and Vibrators
and wherever the conversation ended
I knew that their was going to be
more talk later about vibrators
because the
over testosteroned boys at this party
were punching eachother
with criticism

swinging fuzzy words

They being boys would have never had the confidence
to inspire one another to talk to one of these girls
because these guys didn't know how to approach these
girls themselves

And this isn't the leftover alcohol bubbling

Confused Dazed Not.

I'm stunned
wishing I was 21

Hitting 21 for him
my favorite cousin
playing favorites
I could tell it was a real party
because we stood out as
best friends and cousins


Think drink,
maybe threw a few winks in at some girls
and then it him me

I must have talked to everyone at this party
and although I touched everyone
I didn't really touch
anyone

feeling down
dragged
going stag
to and on the way home
before the alcohol wears off
I get home
scratch the deadlock a few times
crumble up the stairs
and pass out on the floor
next to my cali king

For I live in Cali
but I do not see a bed
that is unfit for a king

so I wait
like a prince in suspense
for his queen
I weight

the anchor
dropping

no photo
Sun 09/21/08 09:57 AM
heads nodding
feet flopping
balls dropping
and we both
go home alone

were we at the same party?

flowerforyou flowerforyou bigsmile

d4tc's photo
Sun 09/21/08 10:23 AM

heads nodding
feet flopping
balls dropping
and we both
go home alone

were we at the same party?

flowerforyou flowerforyou bigsmile


bigsmile laugh

I would have noticed if you were at the party. :wink:

Thanks pkd, nice add. flowerforyou


no photo
Sun 09/21/08 10:59 AM


heads nodding
feet flopping
balls dropping
and we both
go home alone

were we at the same party?

flowerforyou flowerforyou bigsmile


bigsmile laugh

I would have noticed if you were at the party. :wink:

Thanks pkd, nice add. flowerforyou



blushing I would have noticed you toobigsmile bigsmile

no photo
Sun 09/21/08 11:22 AM

What a night!

it was like a bonfire
surrounded by ice sculptures

some spitfires

new sounds
new moves
old sounds
old moves

everyone shuffling
feet like cards
different hands around the room

outdoors
just the same

I was in the middle
over the edge
on the flip
under a rip
tidal wave
sloshing
splurging on my consumption
as my 4th leg resembled the all mighty tap

Keg pumping;

one
two
three
four
five

5 times being key

pump
pump
pump
pump
pump

Just when you hear the air
start to tighten
thats when you'll notice a good squirt
comming out
and were not talking about
the squirt in the yellow can
but the yellow squirt in the por
cel
ian approaching

Whahair
fuzz grows
and words become mold
blurred between the lines for the most part
to a sober log
yet their was not a log
to sand down it's bump
with plenty of grain to go against
there could have been

Sober? Who? Tell me.
Who was sober to drive safe?
I don't believe you
and speaking of defective logs
there was neither
even the wallflowers
were watered

everyone knew someone

and if you didn't know anyone
someone would introduce you

It was like that
all over the place

The out of costume
in character cheerleaders
in their squads
rallying pep talks
about what else?
Sex and Vibrators
and wherever the conversation ended
I knew that their was going to be
more talk later about vibrators
because the
over testosteroned boys at this party
were punching eachother
with criticism

swinging fuzzy words

They being boys would have never had the confidence
to inspire one another to talk to one of these girls
because these guys didn't know how to approach these
girls themselves

And this isn't the leftover alcohol bubbling

Confused Dazed Not.

I'm stunned
wishing I was 21

Hitting 21 for him
my favorite cousin
playing favorites
I could tell it was a real party
because we stood out as
best friends and cousins


Think drink,
maybe threw a few winks in at some girls
and then it him me

I must have talked to everyone at this party
and although I touched everyone
I didn't really touch
anyone

feeling down
dragged
going stag
to and on the way home
before the alcohol wears off
I get home
scratch the deadlock a few times
crumble up the stairs
and pass out on the floor
next to my cali king

For I live in Cali
but I do not see a bed
that is unfit for a king

so I wait
like a prince in suspense
for his queen
I weight

the anchor
dropping




i am very unselfishly selfish

TxsGal3333's photo
Mon 09/22/08 10:03 AM
It's hell when ya float the keg and the party is overdrinks drinks drinks drinks

no photo
Mon 09/22/08 10:55 AM
Hell I can't even remember 41!!laugh :laughing: drinks drinks drinks drinks drinks drinks drinks drinks drinks

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Mon 09/22/08 06:05 PM
flowerforyou