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Topic: You lied
myanimalcracker Joined Wed 02/27/08 Posts: 900	Fri 09/19/08 10:38 PM
You lied to me when you told me you loved me you lied with more than words you lied with tender kisses soft looks and gentle touches. You lied when you told me you needed me You lied with late night calls and problems you said only I could solve. You lied when you said You would die without me You did not die But Something in me Did

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Fri 09/19/08 10:50 PM
You lied to me when you told me you loved me you lied with more than words you lied with tender kisses soft looks and gentle touches. You lied when you told me you needed me You lied with late night calls and problems you said only I could solve. You lied when you said You would die without me You did not die But Something in me Did Hugs you real big

Winx Joined Fri 08/31/07 Posts: 39051	Fri 09/19/08 11:13 PM


s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Sat 09/20/08 01:52 AM Edited by s1owhand on Sat 09/20/08 01:53 AM
What Mom says (((myanimalc)))

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Mon 09/22/08 03:27 PM
inspired "diet of lies"

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Mon 09/22/08 04:07 PM
(((animalc.))) I wonder how many you touched with this that have heard the exact same words with the exact same results

obxwavenut Joined Mon 09/08/08 Posts: 310	Mon 09/22/08 04:16 PM


myanimalcracker Joined Wed 02/27/08 Posts: 900	Mon 09/22/08 04:22 PM Edited by myanimalcracker on Mon 09/22/08 04:22 PM
Thank you all Mom Winx Harold pkd obx

Unknow Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 1972	Mon 09/22/08 04:27 PM
You lied to me when you told me you loved me you lied with more than words you lied with tender kisses soft looks and gentle touches. You lied when you told me you needed me You lied with late night calls and problems you said only I could solve. You lied when you said You would die without me You did not die But Something in me Did Kat take them swimming on one of them orca tours lol just a thought remember i'm no Doctor Phil.

Nova86 Joined Sun 06/29/08 Posts: 4547	Mon 09/22/08 04:29 PM
this was well written and very good...i liked it alot...heard all of those lies before great job

myanimalcracker Joined Wed 02/27/08 Posts: 900	Mon 09/22/08 05:08 PM
Haha...yes, Bill Nova...thank you

DTHRomeo Joined Wed 06/20/07 Posts: 43387	Mon 09/22/08 05:09 PM
Been there Nice writing

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76467	Mon 09/22/08 05:11 PM
To some lies is all they know they lie to get what they want then lie to keep it deceit is a never ending life for them. In reality be thankful the lies finally was seen.

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