Community > Poems & Creative Writing

Previous 1 2 Next

Topic: The Turning Of A Key
AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Wed 09/17/08 10:35 AM
when i first saw you, your eyes pulled me in; into your awakening dawn, into all of you i was drawn. with Love arriving, all fear was gone. your voice, your face your embrace....you left not a trace of wonder as to who you were. and, my heart stirred with gratitude and excitement. might i be yours? might you be mine? the time is arriving when we both shall know a freedom that enables the turning of a key, the meaning of "we." what a beautiful day that will be.... what a beautiful bouquet meant for you and me JDS 09/17/08

lastmanstanding602 Joined Tue 12/11/07 Posts: 1979	Wed 09/17/08 10:37 AM
when i first saw you, your eyes pulled me in; into your awakening dawn, into all of you i was drawn. with Love arriving, all fear was gone. your voice, your face your embrace....you left not a trace of wonder as to who you were. and, my heart stirred with gratitude and excitement. might i be yours? might you be mine? the time is arriving when we both shall know a freedom that enables the turning of a key, the meaning of "we." what a beautiful day that will be.... what a beautiful bouquet meant for you and me JDS 09/17/08 ooo beautiful!

BobbyJ Joined Fri 02/22/08 Posts: 1368	Wed 09/17/08 10:39 AM
Wow! That's it. That's all I can say!

flame1cutie Joined Thu 04/24/08 Posts: 7307	Wed 09/17/08 10:39 AM
when i first saw you, your eyes pulled me in; into your awakening dawn, into all of you i was drawn. with Love arriving, all fear was gone. your voice, your face your embrace....you left not a trace of wonder as to who you were. and, my heart stirred with gratitude and excitement. might i be yours? might you be mine? the time is arriving when we both shall know a freedom that enables the turning of a key, the meaning of "we." what a beautiful day that will be.... what a beautiful bouquet meant for you and me JDS 09/17/08 Awesome

ddn122 Joined Mon 11/05/07 Posts: 12855	Wed 09/17/08 10:40 AM
might i be yours? might you be mine? Sure! Call me...

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Wed 09/17/08 10:43 AM
when i first saw you, your eyes pulled me in; into your awakening dawn, into all of you i was drawn. with Love arriving, all fear was gone. your voice, your face your embrace....you left not a trace of wonder as to who you were. and, my heart stirred with gratitude and excitement. might i be yours? might you be mine? the time is arriving when we both shall know a freedom that enables the turning of a key, the meaning of "we." what a beautiful day that will be.... what a beautiful bouquet meant for you and me JDS 09/17/08 ooo beautiful! Ty so much lastmanstanding!

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Wed 09/17/08 10:43 AM
May that bouquet be of year-round blossoms!

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Wed 09/17/08 10:44 AM
Wow! That's it. That's all I can say! (((Bobby))), big hugs....ty!

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Wed 09/17/08 10:45 AM
when i first saw you, your eyes pulled me in; into your awakening dawn, into all of you i was drawn. with Love arriving, all fear was gone. your voice, your face your embrace....you left not a trace of wonder as to who you were. and, my heart stirred with gratitude and excitement. might i be yours? might you be mine? the time is arriving when we both shall know a freedom that enables the turning of a key, the meaning of "we." what a beautiful day that will be.... what a beautiful bouquet meant for you and me JDS 09/17/08 Awesome flame, you are always so kind. Ty...

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Wed 09/17/08 10:46 AM
might i be yours? might you be mine? Sure! Call me... (((ddn))) ty for reading and for your ever so sweet ways

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Wed 09/17/08 10:48 AM
May that bouquet be of year-round blossoms! Ty for such a lovely sentiment and wish (((DKW)))

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Wed 09/17/08 10:51 AM
bouquets all around as I hear your heart sing

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Wed 09/17/08 10:59 AM
bouquets all around as I hear your heart sing Awww, (((pkd))), you're going to make me weep in the best of ways. Ty.

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76436	Wed 09/17/08 11:29 AM
Beautiful as always!

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Wed 09/17/08 11:54 AM
Beautiful as always! Oh, Hi sweetie, it's so good to see you!...haven't seen you in awhile....Ty for your comment and for the flower!

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Wed 09/17/08 04:30 PM
may the key fit the lock perfectly and you be forever captivated

ArtGurl Joined Sun 04/08/07 Posts: 17722	Wed 09/17/08 06:52 PM
beautiful!

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Wed 09/17/08 07:24 PM
((( Angel )))) May the blessings of "we" stand still in time and as your souls unlock all that is,, may the harmony of hearts sing Beautiful

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Thu 09/18/08 06:29 AM
may the key fit the lock perfectly and you be forever captivated Such a kind and gracious sentiment (((bastet))). Ty.

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Thu 09/18/08 06:30 AM
beautiful! Ty so much ArtGurl! Right back at ya!