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Differentkindofwench's photo
Fri 09/12/08 09:08 PM
Pins-n-needles
Rippling under skin.
Wit-whipped tongue
Lashing back again.

Giving rise
To your monolith of desire.
Pulling back,
Teasing up the fire.

Back-n-forth
Some quick side-to-side.
A low moan escapes,
As he hits his stride.

Life with him;
Metaphoric bull ride!
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Fri 09/12/08 09:09 PM
Edited by Unknow on Fri 09/12/08 09:11 PM

Pins-n-needles
Rippling under skin.
Wit-whipped tongue
Lashing back again.

Giving rise
To your monolith of desire.
Pulling back,
Teasing up the fire.

Back-n-forth
Some quick side-to-side.
A low moan escapes,
As he hits his stride.

Life with him;
Metaphoric bull ride!


biggrin:laughing:
LAMom's photo
Fri 09/12/08 09:14 PM
Metaphoric my *******laugh
Differentkindofwench's photo
Fri 09/12/08 09:17 PM

Metaphoric my *******laugh
Why Mom! (In my best Scarlet O'Hara accent) What ev'a do ya mean???????
LAMom's photo
Fri 09/12/08 09:18 PM


Metaphoric my *******laugh
Why Mom! (In my best Scarlet O'Hara accent) What ev'a do ya mean???????


Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Mom was not born yesturday laugh rofl
no photo
Sat 09/13/08 07:20 AM



Metaphoric my *******laugh
Why Mom! (In my best Scarlet O'Hara accent) What ev'a do ya mean???????


Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Mom was not born yesturday laugh rofl


biggrin :laughing: :laughing: :laughing: WHAT??????????:laughing: :laughing: :laughing: :laughing:
s1owhand's photo
Sat 09/13/08 09:03 AM
bigsmile

devil
AngelLight's photo
Sat 09/13/08 09:54 AM

Metaphoric my *******laugh




rofl :laughing: rofl :laughing: rofl :laughing: rofl


Good write DKW! :wink:


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