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i stand before you
take off my clothing piece by piece you see my imperfect body bared to you its scars and bruises and freckles stretch marks and moles not at all vulnerable i tear open my chest reveal my pumping heart in the bloody gaping wound peel off the suit of my skin nerves and muscles nothing i stand before you bared not at all vulnerable but your knowledge of the invisible scars and bruises old wounds scabbed over scabby wounds unhealed you see them all you know where to kick and scratch and you do you want nothing of me take nothing with you when you leave you see the tears i hide you cultivate and harvest them to crush into a sour wine you later throw into my face and you laugh and you laugh even though i am not prostrated by your feet even though i do not beg or plea i am vulnerable then |
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makes me want to write
about careless handling razor sharp blades and thoughtless words and hot acid no one is immune to betrayal the ones so close to us have our keys and the gasoline (((myanimalc)))  
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Being vulnerable is the only way to be accepted by someone completely,for good or bad its the only option and takes a brave person...nice write
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i stand before you take off my clothing piece by piece you see my imperfect body bared to you its scars and bruises and freckles stretch marks and moles not at all vulnerable i tear open my chest reveal my pumping heart in the bloody gaping wound peel off the suit of my skin nerves and muscles nothing i stand before you bared not at all vulnerable but your knowledge of the invisible scars and bruises old wounds scabbed over scabby wounds unhealed you see them all you know where to kick and scratch and you do you want nothing of me take nothing with you when you leave you see the tears i hide you cultivate and harvest them to crush into a sour wine you later throw into my face and you laugh and you laugh even though i am not prostrated by your feet even though i do not beg or plea i am vulnerable then Ahhhh great minds my darling girl~ Standing naked and exposed my skin crawling with irritation. I look in the mirror Blank Stricken as I struggle with hesitation Oh, such imperfection I see, so marred and scarred by my convoluted life Does that face really belong to me? Lined and faded by such strife . Chaotic, sad A scared little girl Lost inside a woman aged and grown Can I let her out to play once again? Or is she too young To be left alone In a big bad world often cruel to an anatomical tenement long inhabited and too well worn to be viewed as a fresh and passion compelling exotica I spend the long harsh hours mentally chewing me up and spitting me out Welcome! To my Neurotica ((((ANIMALCRACKER))))))))
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Very nice write! Well done indeed...
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Being vulnerable is the only way to be accepted by someone completely,for good or bad its the only option and takes a brave person...nice write Great comment Socratease, didn't look at it that way. Animal-your writing is just amazing
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Thank you
Harold
Socratease
MsWiz
Mystique
pkd
Mom
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Being vulnerable is the only way to be accepted by someone completely,for good or bad its the only option and takes a brave person...nice write socratease knows of what he speaks. beautiful sharing animal
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