Topic: Fancy meeting you here...
EtherealEmbers's photo
Wed 09/10/08 06:19 PM
Fancy Meeting You Here

So I sit on the stance
That I'm through with romance
And with straight face I lie
Through the feelings I hide
Do you see what I'm not?
Do you see who I am?
I can run and play dumb
But I'm fooling no man

All I want, all that's before me
Will soon be unveiled
As a silent symphony
Teasing and stirring
In some weird fantasy
He enters the scene
Soothing the sorrow
Silencing my screams
Of boredom and stillness
Haunting my dreams

Who does this hero allege to be?
Just a man who talks to me
There's nothing he's said
That should lead me to conjure
The thoughts in my head
Or this feeling of grandeur

For he hasn't said much
That others have not
But still I find my mind
Wandering blindly
Through blankets of haze
Wondering would, if he could
Want to kiss me for days
And oh, how I question if
My name's crossed his lips
In the breath of his slumber
Or a moment of bliss

There I go, I must stop
As the truth has been glossed
Over and I unwittingly lost
My grip on the here and now
Oh, what's new, story of my life
To marry the man who wanted no wife!
ATU 2007

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Wed 09/10/08 06:28 PM
"For he hasn't said much
That others have not
But still I find my mind
Wandering blindly
Through blankets of haze
Wondering would, if he could
Want to kiss me for days
And oh, how I question if
My name's crossed his lips
In the breath of his slumber
Or a moment of bliss"

Oh lovely thoughts and questions all women have asked themselves. Wonderful piece~flowerforyou

EtherealEmbers's photo
Wed 09/10/08 07:07 PM
bigsmile ty

Socratease's photo
Wed 09/10/08 08:00 PM
The hope will outlast the worry or defeat..."As the truth has been glossed over and i,unwittingly lost",nice line and nice write

EtherealEmbers's photo
Wed 09/10/08 10:27 PM
Most definitely! Thanks :D

LAMom's photo
Wed 09/10/08 10:48 PM
flowers flowers

d4tc's photo
Thu 09/11/08 03:13 AM
Very Nice! bigsmile

s1owhand's photo
Thu 09/11/08 04:11 AM
:smile:

tell me true lies truly

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EtherealEmbers's photo
Thu 09/11/08 09:05 AM
:heart: Thanks everyone

kc0003's photo
Thu 09/11/08 09:18 AM
this is a really nice write

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Thu 09/11/08 09:55 AM
so many excellent lines here-great jobflowerforyou flowerforyou