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Topic: Don't know what to name this one
Mystique42 Joined Thu 04/12/07 Posts: 5045	Tue 09/09/08 08:50 PM
All the distance Can't change the way That I'm feeling For you today Though the silence Breaks my heart I let you go To do your part I can't be the one Who's always trying I can't be the one Left here alone and crying When I'm dealing With my grief A call from you Can only bring relief I don't need a break From what I'm feeling I need your love Especially as I'm reeling Through this life I have Which may feel far My heart is right there Right where you are Maybe you're afraid To truly believe My love for you Is upon my sleeve No hidden lies No fantasies I love you so How I hate to leave It's your turn To call me if you want I can't pursue Though you are in my thoughts I've made mistakes Of doing all the work Look at where it's got me In this funky quirk So when you don't hear Anything from me Just know it's your turn Faith sets us free I'm trusting God If this is meant to be Time will reveal Your true feelings for me 9/9/08

maxxximus007 Joined Mon 11/13/06 Posts: 6082	Tue 09/09/08 08:52 PM
hope

flame1cutie Joined Thu 04/24/08 Posts: 7307	Tue 09/09/08 08:54 PM
Very nice write, how about just "True Feelings"

darkowl1 Joined Sat 01/12/08 Posts: 13060	Tue 09/09/08 08:54 PM
perpetual butterflies, heart pangs, patience....., true love, nice though

Mystique42 Joined Thu 04/12/07 Posts: 5045	Wed 09/10/08 05:16 AM
Thank you flame... True Feelings they are! Max... Hope...what else is there? darkowl... True Love... Yes it is that

Unknow Joined Thu 06/14/07 Posts: 2155	Wed 09/10/08 06:08 AM
Alone but stronge? Nice write.

Unknow Joined Thu 06/14/07 Posts: 2155	Wed 09/10/08 06:09 AM
Alone but stronge? Nice write.

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Wed 09/10/08 06:13 AM
How about Trusting My Heart...Only your heart knows what you feel and how you should make your decisions. So you should trust your heart.

Mystique42 Joined Thu 04/12/07 Posts: 5045	Wed 09/10/08 07:18 AM
Wolf... trusting ones heart isn't always easy, but I know exactly where you are coming from. Thanks! mtg....Thank you. I don't always feel strong, but sometimes you have to walk into the unknown and try anyway.

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Wed 09/10/08 07:27 AM
Your strength is there,, Walk slowly listen openly ,,, You my lovely one deserve happiness Hope, faith and love rests within you,,, smile yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa,, I can see it

Mystique42 Joined Thu 04/12/07 Posts: 5045	Wed 09/10/08 03:00 PM
La Mom YOU made me smile.... thanks sister! I'll be walking in faith!

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Wed 09/10/08 03:02 PM
La Mom YOU made me smile.... thanks sister! I'll be walking in faith! Don't forget the Pizzzzazzzzzzzzzzzzzzz in the step Hugs to you

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Wed 09/10/08 05:11 PM
Awaiting Revelation

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Wed 09/10/08 05:30 PM
I guess I hear the title as Emotional Lifeguard. Emotional Lifeguard When I'm drowning in my tears. Lost in the tide of years. You hear the cries of my heart. My Emotional Lifeguard. You kindness saves me from the pain. Shelters me from life's rain. Your love is the wind beneath my feet. As you teach me to emotionally walk again. My Emotional Lifeguard. A tailor made soul God created for me. You have found the fragments of my heart. Placed them back where they belong. As you belong next to me. My Emotional Lifeguard the guardian angel of my heart.

Mystique42 Joined Thu 04/12/07 Posts: 5045	Wed 09/10/08 06:08 PM
Up2us... that is beautiful. Thank you for taking the time to write such a nice response/poem. Different... I am certainly awaiting... no doubt about that one. Thank you.