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Edited by
Queene123
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Mon 09/08/08 10:49 AM
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Should you ever feel alone
If finding times hard to bare You can still count on me Know I shall always be there You shall be in my thoughts If you are hurting, I feel it too It is my friendship sincerity I shall forever share with you There each step of the way My support you can depend I will listen if you need me With love your forever friend |
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I really really liked this. That was nicely written. How are you doing Queenie?
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Touch, emotional feeling with a zap an urge to feel the deeper kind of love.
Exploring around finding their every darkest secrets wiping every worried wrinkles. Slowly and lightly outlining their shell to find a way in so they don't feel so alone and scared. Wiping a tear that slowly drips from their soul. Your touch reminds them that they are not completly alone. Now there is a feeling of a deep lonely thought that you may feel that you are alone and there is no exscape, until one person reaches out and reminds you that you are not the only one that feels so alone. Take a moment out of your life and reach out a hand and say hello. |
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Nice write!
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Great write... to the point.
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Your poem is very well written. Excellent Job!
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Nice write
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