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The unspoken love
that I carried in my heart pumped blood like lead through my veins. In a moment of clarity (sickening insanity) I regurgitated every last blood cell. Type A negative. Pools of hemoglobin clotted on the floor and I felt faint at the sight (anemic chain reaction). I was suddenly a hundred pounds lighter and floating above a chalk-outline silhouette that could only be my own. So I stitched my wrists shut with nothing left to bleed. Right there on the ground was all that’s left of me. |
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you are macabre. i like it a lot...very emotive and slightly sarcastic...
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Thank you
V Vlad |
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The unspoken love that I carried in my heart pumped blood like lead through my veins. In a moment of clarity (sickening insanity) I regurgitated every last blood cell. Type A negative. Pools of hemoglobin clotted on the floor and I felt faint at the sight (anemic chain reaction). I was suddenly a hundred pounds lighter and floating above a chalk-outline silhouette that could only be my own. So I stitched my wrists shut with nothing left to bleed. Right there on the ground was all that’s left of me. This rush all over my skin of heated sweet life. Now damaged and hurt, feeling loves bitter strife. Nice read and keep them coming,wink. |
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funny how we can be reduced to such basic particles given the right circumstances
nice write |
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everywhere
all i see is empty floating incorporeal you the lifeblood all spilt out drained exhausted renewed free |
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everywhere all i see is empty floating incorporeal you the lifeblood all spilt out drained exhausted renewed free Within the circle there is no curve Only perspective Within perfection there is not but change The dimples in the sand Where he walks in silence Lead to my love The same path leads to me And thank you (((iam , kc , Mom ))) |
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