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Edited by
Up2Us
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Sun 09/07/08 08:29 AM
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Tears... fell like the rain.
Like a candle set afire. Our love began to grow. After the flames grew higher and higher. We loss track of our love. Tears... fell like the rain. Our love left me speechless. And there's nothing left to say. Now that silence stands between us. An it's getting stronger with each and every passing day. Tears... fell like the rain. Life it seems is a journey across ones own heart. We were two days next to each other. Not even time could break us apart. Heartache came into the picture, and abruptively had its way. Our sunny glass day drifted into a storm of heartache an pain. True Love is now a paisley memory faded by the emptiness of each day. Tears... fell like the rain. I'm now searching for myself within the fragments of a broken heart. A casualty laying helpless on this battle field of love. Forever is a distant thought of pleasure that I quietly dream of. Reality is now the measure of heartache, my heart cries from... Tears... fell like the rain. A word for a word A kiss for a tear The beginning for the end. Situations often lie. The truth sometimes is very hard to find. Girl leave the past behind. An get on with your life. Up2Us © Copyright 2008 |
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Very Nice
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oh my gosh did u write that for me.
it was amazing and made me cry |
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oh my gosh did u write that for me. it was amazing and made me cry Sometimes heartache is a broken mirror that cast the reflection of us all.... |
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wow! amazing! thanks for the write!
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That was a very amazing write, it reaches into the soul of everyone
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that was very touching, very detailed, i like this poem, it shows strong emotions, its strong, i like it, keep writing
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Thanks...
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very nice, very moving
thank you for sharing it |
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A very heartfelt write,,,
Hugs |
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