Topic: When
Sharris's photo
Wed 09/03/08 09:26 AM
When

When you've a mind
To share your heart more,
Perhaps it would be
Where the sunset adorns.
Suspended in time,
Just before "Ahh",
When the sky pulls the shade,
As the tide begins draw.
The lapping and gurgle,
Against the hull,
Makes sharing a moment,
With love as it pulls,
Out to sea,
And to rest on the wave,
When you've the moment
For two souls to engage.

Raine Les 9/3/2008

flame1cutie's photo
Wed 09/03/08 09:29 AM
Nice writeflowerforyou flowerforyou

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Wed 09/03/08 09:45 AM
Thank you Sadie...very nicebigsmile flowerforyou

Noden's photo
Wed 09/03/08 10:08 AM
Claps for a wonderful journey you've just shared, thank you very much for that insight, Sharrisflowers winking :thumbsup: waving tongue2

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Wed 09/03/08 04:58 PM
:heart: flowerforyou Nice poem,,,,,:wink: