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Inchoate
My existence in you With a clairvoyant salute of shadow hands She grins behind your closed mouth Enjoying the sensation of tongue to tongue My existence in you A brightening of encircled edges Bundled into cellophane letters Pink tiptoeing the rhythm of your lonely walk Unable to see your wounded eyes she won’t run Obscure to herself In the glowing church of your skull undressed in tomorrow’s memory She climbs atop the altar in a camisole of flowers My existence in you has promised conjugal visits I also love this shining likeness of myself |
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wow
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pulls a chair up to the cracker barrel!!
Mmmm...fresh Cookies lays out the checkerboard... it looks like a nice place to play. and there are fresh baked treats!! |
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Inchoate My existence in you With a clairvoyant salute of shadow hands She grins behind your closed mouth Enjoying the sensation of tongue to tongue My existence in you A brightening of encircled edges Bundled into cellophane letters Pink tiptoeing the rhythm of your lonely walk Unable to see your wounded eyes she won’t run Obscure to herself In the glowing church of your skull undressed in tomorrow’s memory She climbs atop the altar in a camisole of flowers My existence in you has promised conjugal visits I also love this shining likeness of myself YOU are one very very talented young lady |
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YOU are one very very talented young lady Thank you so much, MsWiz |
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very well done....
excellent write |
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Thank you
john s1ow MsWiz kc |
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Edited by
myanimalcracker
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Mon 09/01/08 11:09 PM
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Wishbone, Clavicle Kiss
I couldn't wear that white dress you painted tapering into the blue. So I lay with you naked. The unbuttoning of a politely curved lip tips kisses on my chest, stomach, funny bone, clavicle, wishbone. I stammer a preface to your impatient hands, impaled by my prattle, as a litany of tongues imprisons my groans and my ear sleeps on a bed of your sighs. |
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"i knew it"
a pause from the checkers... a fresh plate of Cookies! |
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"i knew it" a pause from the checkers... a fresh plate of Cookies! you always know... |
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Inchoate My existence in you With a clairvoyant salute of shadow hands She grins behind your closed mouth Enjoying the sensation of tongue to tongue My existence in you A brightening of encircled edges Bundled into cellophane letters Pink tiptoeing the rhythm of your lonely walk Unable to see your wounded eyes she won’t run Obscure to herself In the glowing church of your skull undressed in tomorrow’s memory She climbs atop the altar in a camisole of flowers My existence in you has promised conjugal visits I also love this shining likeness of myself YOU are one very very talented young lady Ditto |
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The Sip
drawn from the well deep within subterranean cool earth a filtered aquifer lowering a clean cup down and down for ever it seems with a splash that echoes a single droplet in a cavernous pool a taste is retrieved overflowing as it rocks to the surface clear and pure from the calm sheltered oasis my summer spring crisp and wet in my hand raised into sunlight beads glisten and run along my fingers down my forearm trickling refreshment like fresh washed lettuce drink life essence absolutely fine make me new |
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(((Harold)))
Very nice!! |
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Edited by
Unknow
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Tue 09/02/08 09:41 AM
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BAVO!!!!!!!!!! Very well done!!
throwin' flowers at your feet on the stage of life!! |
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Very well written to the both of you, now I know why I love poems so much
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Contemplation
We are mutes. discovering each other in words and sparse notes without lyrics. Amongst other happenings, we will forget this and yearn for it again. Envying others who have found it. We will pity ourselves for losing it. We are lost, in our wandering gazes and so many faces. Enclosed within ourselves, our breath, to not blow out candles, or feed fires. Inarticulate longings as eloquent prayers. With swollen tongues in closed mouths. We will smile silent. Later we will grope for a sound. There will be uneasy nights with everything bare and distant. I will ask you nothing and answers will come from everywhere. |
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We Entwine
I had an inkling More than delicate tears and soft lips More than a sip from your golden chalice Unfettered by affection Surrounded by miser’s smiles In the aftertaste of your voracious tongue The rolling apples of your words Beneath the dimly vanishing The common language of selfish flesh |
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You have been given a gift of being a wonderful writer and I am blessed to be able to read your words every day.
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