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Topic: Galaxies
AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Sat 08/30/08 08:49 AM
diamonds fall from heaven galaxies light the sky another night is turning stars don't need to try looking to the sky there's no asking why every detail is in its place, as all comes together in one big warm embrace the moon makes room for a rising sun so that the dawn can break. look at everything you have and know there are no mistakes touch the diamonds, and galaxies, and touch the moon and sun. close your eyes and feel the pulse and see what you've become. JDS 08/03/08

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Sat 08/30/08 09:10 AM
nice

wolfchic Joined Wed 09/26/07 Posts: 8036	Sat 08/30/08 09:15 AM


LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Sat 08/30/08 09:22 AM
diamonds fall from heaven galaxies light the sky another night is turning stars don't need to try looking to the sky there's no asking why every detail is in its place, as all comes together in one big warm embrace the moon makes room for a rising sun so that the dawn can break. look at everything you have and know there are no mistakes touch the diamonds, and galaxies, and touch the moon and sun. close your eyes and feel the pulse and see what you've become. JDS 08/03/08 close your eyes and feel the pulse and see what you've become. Breathtaking

flame1cutie Joined Thu 04/24/08 Posts: 7307	Sat 08/30/08 09:36 AM
Very nice write

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Sat 08/30/08 03:54 PM
close your eyes and feel the pulse and see what you've become. I've become a star....among the many who shine brightly across these pages. We are all stars in this wonderful galaxy and not one shines brighter than the other. But your writing shines vividly.

Unknow Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 1972	Sat 08/30/08 04:39 PM
diamonds fall from heaven galaxies light the sky another night is turning stars don't need to try looking to the sky there's no asking why every detail is in its place, as all comes together in one big warm embrace the moon makes room for a rising sun so that the dawn can break. look at everything you have and know there are no mistakes touch the diamonds, and galaxies, and touch the moon and sun. close your eyes and feel the pulse and see what you've become. JDS 08/03/08 Thank you AngelLight thank you

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Sat 08/30/08 05:15 PM
very nice Angel

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Sat 08/30/08 10:59 PM
Ty MM Wolf, I'm glad you liked it (((Denise))), thank you, as always Hi there flame ..thanks for the flowers! (((Robert))), Beautiful comment! Big hugs (((1000))), you're so welcome! (((P))), right back at ya * side note ~ I wrote this piece 08/30/08, not on 08/03/08 oops!

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