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I don't have a title for this one yet, it's a work in progress.
I thought I'd toss it out there to see what happens, since I've developed a block. Teardrops fall From a wretched, weeping soul As light steps away From a heart decayed and dim. Faint steps echo As death seeps on by, Leaving darkened shadow For his tears Have long run dry. Unkind words, Like a dagger makes the wound With salted disregard, Critics make their move. A bitter anger tasted Within this wretched soul, A darker form emerges As judgements take their toll. Echoes from the past Resound in darkened silence, While laughter is replaced By wishes Much too violent. Many wish to scoff At what they may behold And others lay their blame With what's refused to know. What right have we to judge Without due regard And spew our unkind words That may only bring more harm? The strongest hearts are careful To hear the silent words Like angels they attend The wounds that cause our hurts. Fadedspirit (work in progress) |
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full of emotion
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"i like it" - reminds me of the Dark Knight
characters the Joker and Two-Face though... |
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That was great, full of feeling
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Edited by
Differentkindofwench
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Thu 08/28/08 07:26 AM
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Blocked - mental blocks emotional blocks tears blocked and dried creating salt licks of the soul. Shamanic detective following dried tracks backwards. Rearranging blocks of belief to purposeful flow.
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I don't have a title for this one yet, it's a work in progress. I thought I'd toss it out there to see what happens, since I've developed a block. Teardrops fall From a wretched, weeping soul As light steps away From a heart decayed and dim. Faint steps echo As death seeps on by, Leaving darkened shadow For his tears Have long run dry. Unkind words, Like a dagger makes the wound With salted disregard, Critics make their move. A bitter anger tasted Within this wretched soul, A darker form emerges As judgements take their toll. Echoes from the past Resound in darkened silence, While laughter is replaced By wishes Much too violent. Many wish to scoff At what they may behold And others lay their blame With what's refused to know. What right have we to judge Without due regard And spew our unkind words That may only bring more harm? The strongest hearts are careful To hear the silent words Like angels they attend The wounds that cause our hurts. Fadedspirit (work in progress) I see no blocks here,,, Just a humble soul |
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Thanks pkd.
Thanks s1owhand, glad you liked it. Thanks flame1cutie. Thanks DKW, I'm glad you like it. Awww, thanks LAMom. Maybe I'm trying to hard. |
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all you need is a title
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Glad you liked it shauna.
Hmm....but what to call it. Any ideas 1000111010123? Glad you liked it. |
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Glad you liked it shauna. Hmm....but what to call it. Any ideas 1000111010123? Glad you liked it. that is best answered from your own soul |
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