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You say a marriage is great
Wait Let's debate Look at your mate Sitting next to you despising you eyes in view of everything disregarding you loathing you could be holding you If he wasn't hardening you How about you? Does this make you satisfied? or is this a fabrication manifested into a lie? Askew His view Your view (behind the make up) Same views Askewed No new news no destination in formation of pace'n moping hardly coping saulking in blue shoes Who knew the happiness would fade could've have made for better days had things never changed yet all things change not everything makes cents From George W. to George W. Red White & fenced |
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Very nice, Jason...
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Another poetic.
I myself write poetry. Maybe we should talk about our poetry. Yours is beautiful and even though you write it for yourself it is nice to have it appreciated. x |
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awesome write i've read a few of yours and you're talented keep it up
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Thanks for the replies.
![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Very flattering Smurf and Charmaine. ![]() |
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Well done my friend!
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Thanks for the replies. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Very flattering Smurf and Charmaine. ![]() I got special love... You made me a very happy woman. When are you back online xx |
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