I'm a big girl so be honest. I can take criticism.

being a fan myself and only missing one of ur references, u might want to tone it down a bit. FROMing is fun when ur at a con or faire, but when ur tryin to mingle w/ the mundanes...

use that vivid imagination when ur flirting w/ suitors

other than that, surf the forums more and get to know the great ppl here

I understand what you say but you deal with Joe Public here

more pics darling.

&& i know im not a man, just trying to help

Well first of all men are visual and about 90% of them won't bother to read your profile until you reply to them. So I recommend that you put a couple of more photos on here not the one you have even though it's not a bad photo get one with a close up of your face and one of you doing something else that's up to you of course. I'd make it less wordy and talk more about your likes, dislikes and what you're looking for in a man. You might want go on the religious forums seeing as how you're a Christian.

i agree its to long

First, what's with all the shouting? I get that you want to make those points, but the caps make it seem like I have offended you just by reading your profile and not meeting your requirements.

But I really think that your profile is so inside and so targeted to those that understand and appreciate it as much as you do. Do you really want to limit yourself to just those? Maybe it would be fun to meet someone that knows nothing about tolkein. I think it's better to simply say you're a huge fan and then talk about your other interests and wants.

You sound like a really nice girl...Tell more about yourself and let them see more of that.

Hahaha..

Personally, I'd have to respectfully disagree on the length issue.

If, as most people agree, "communication" is so important DURING a relationship, why would it be any less important in BEGINNING one?

Its all GREAT,,but for SURE,,,more pic's because MOST dudes here only LOOK anyway,wink,lol...so feel free to entice their glances,lol...

I've gotten rid of most of the inside stuff, ditched all the caps, and I'm adding more photos.

You are cute.

Thanks