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jus let me know what you think of my profile and pics
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Very nice.
Hello and welcome! |
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howdy your avery good lookin gal. send me some corn so i can make popcorn.
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looks good to me darlin i dont see anything that could be changed
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Nice !! !! welcome also !! and good luck !!
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Nice pics....but for goodness sake.....punctuation!!!
That run on sentence in your profile is hard to read. The info is clear enough, but a pause ( or at least the perception of one ) between lines of thought would be helpful. |
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I agree with the punctuation thing.
Also, and pls dont be offended by this cos u DID ask, but ur headline talks of 'finding the right one' and imo, that shouldnt be ur main objective for being on here, it might make u look a lil desperate. No offence meant. |
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Edited by
tlc1982
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Sun 08/24/08 01:36 AM
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jus being honest thats me,sorry about the pun jus throwing it all together if you understand it its fine then
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howdy your avery good lookin gal. send me some corn so i can make popcorn. |
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Looks good from my computer.
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You're very pretty and from your profile you sound like you have an inner substance and beauty as well.
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I would definitely add punctuation and break up your description into paragraphs. Good photos.
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