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Topic: Let Me Be Your Ointment
Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Thu 08/14/08 07:20 AM
Let Me Be Your Ointment When you are suffering from pain And the feeling hurts so bad, Let me be your ointment, my dear To heal what you have. If you suffer a broken heart Or misery from the split, Let me be the rope that pulls you From that bottomless pit. If you need rescued from drowning In the tears of your sorrow, Let me be your soothsayer So you can see tomorrow. But if you have a cut or scrape These I cannot heal, But I will do the best I can With your heart, I steal.

Redsoxfan1 Joined Sat 12/29/07 Posts: 8388	Thu 08/14/08 07:23 AM
Beautiful write, (((Robert)))!! So sweet!

SmurfyPoet292721 Joined Mon 06/16/08 Posts: 656	Thu 08/14/08 07:26 AM
Robert your talent amazes me :D awesome write

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Thu 08/14/08 07:30 AM
Robert your talent amazes me :D awesome write Thank you Nicki sweetie...yours does me too. Glad you liked it. Thanks Erica...I knew you would like it as well.

SmurfyPoet292721 Joined Mon 06/16/08 Posts: 656	Thu 08/14/08 07:34 AM
Robert your talent amazes me :D awesome write Thank you Nicki sweetie...yours does me too. Glad you liked it. Thanks Erica...I knew you would like it as well. Thanks but i really dont have much talent

SKPCG Joined Mon 03/03/08 Posts: 14708	Thu 08/14/08 07:34 AM
Nice, Robert!!!!!

Sweet_and_Sassy Joined Fri 07/06/07 Posts: 217	Thu 08/14/08 07:40 AM
Let Me Be Your Ointment When you are suffering from pain And the feeling hurts so bad, Let me be your ointment, my dear To heal what you have. If you suffer a broken heart Or misery from the split, Let me be the rope that pulls you From that bottomless pit. If you need rescued from drowning In the tears of your sorrow, Let me be your soothsayer So you can see tomorrow. But if you have a cut or scrape These I cannot heal, But I will do the best I can With your heart, I steal. Very nice...

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Thu 08/14/08 07:46 AM
Thanks Suze and Cat...Neosporin was already taken...

Sweet_and_Sassy Joined Fri 07/06/07 Posts: 217	Thu 08/14/08 07:48 AM
Thanks Suze and Cat...Neosporin was already taken... I don't think Neosporin will accomplish as much as you.

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Thu 08/14/08 07:50 AM
Thanks Suze and Cat...Neosporin was already taken... I don't think Neosporin will accomplish as much as you. <<<<Eagle claws...that made my day.

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76471	Thu 08/14/08 08:18 AM
good one

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Thu 08/14/08 08:20 AM
good one Glad you liked it Kristi...

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