Topic: <3~A Poet & Chambermaid's Destiny~<3
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Tue 08/05/08 12:06 PM
A mere poet surviving by stroke of pen
As countless perish within a lions den
I am no greater than any condemned man
But a servant beneath a Majesty's hand
No screams of mercy from innocent hung
My life is hinged upon silenced tongue
A windowed views of blood stained land
From fearless men waging a final stand
Emotions lie imprisoned within my room
Pungent smell of wax conceals my gloom
Truth be known I hold a secondary book
I faithfully kept within a mortar nook
The other is filthy with power & lusts
Nothing held from righteous Man's trust
Contemptuous words for my Majesty's eye
So appalled am I to write dreadful lies
An uncleaned feel through hateful hand
Yet appealing to tyrants on stolen land
Such arrogance sitting on gilded throne
I do hear gallows planks creak and moan
A hush falling over his Majesty's crowd
Motionless Knights stand tall and proud
Savage lusting wants for blood to spill
The feverish hunger and orgasmic thrill
Their trumpets sound before mighty roar
I closed my eyes while my spirit soared
This dreadful Kingdom never was my home
Although I'm trapped my heart does roam
One memorable day my life gladly turned
I'd found a destiny;I earnestly yearned
Her ethereal beauty Oh!a heart did soar
There she appeared I shall seek no more
A lonely chambermaid is what they'd see
Their vision corrupted by sheer vanity
Oh!Dear Goddess;I shall whisper to thee
With each breath I've awaited patiently
Her beautiful heart I shall gently hold
I'll tell you tales of righteously bold
We're both low servants trapped in time
Where evils nurtured on demented rhyme
Grasp my hand and venture on from here
Our compass is faith not blinding fear
We'll travel forward were land is free
No dreadful conquests or mortals pleas
Surrender yourself beneath sturdy tree
I'll love you with passion but tenderly
Whisper while caught in blissful throes
These moans captured where nature grows
Then stare deeply into each others eyes
Such yearning sedated with gentle sighs
Our bodies in sync awaits sweet release
There souls are meshed by eternal peace
No longer we cower beneath an evil rule
Nor a mindless cruelty spawned by fools
Open this book that has never been read
Held by oppression they never were said
My enchanting Goddess please read to me
Them beautiful lips speak so eloquently
Her softened shoulders and skin so fair
Speaking of love while I brush her hair
Sunset yields towards star filled night
Our passionate moments reach new height
With our spirits flying above the Earth
A glorious destiny had been given birth

Written by CyPoet aka Cybear 8/5/08
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Tue 08/05/08 12:07 PM
niceflowerforyou

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Tue 08/05/08 12:19 PM
That is a beautiful write, (((Steven)))!!:heart: Thanx for sharing this with me!!smooched

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Tue 08/05/08 12:37 PM
Fantastic writeflowerforyou

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Tue 08/05/08 01:34 PM
This is beautiful Steven...Thank youflowerforyou

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Tue 08/05/08 03:28 PM
Mirror~Thx! 4 reading & commenting on this write.:smile: drinker
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Tue 08/05/08 03:37 PM

A mere poet surviving by stroke of pen
As countless perish within a lions den
I am no greater than any condemned man
But a servant beneath a Majesty's hand
No screams of mercy from innocent hung
My life is hinged upon silenced tongue
A windowed views of blood stained land
From fearless men waging a final stand
Emotions lie imprisoned within my room
Pungent smell of wax conceals my gloom
Truth be known I hold a secondary book
I faithfully kept within a mortar nook
The other is filthy with power & lusts
Nothing held from righteous Man's trust
Contemptuous words for my Majesty's eye
So appalled am I to write dreadful lies
An uncleaned feel through hateful hand
Yet appealing to tyrants on stolen land
Such arrogance sitting on gilded throne
I do hear gallows planks creak and moan
A hush falling over his Majesty's crowd
Motionless Knights stand tall and proud
Savage lusting wants for blood to spill
The feverish hunger and orgasmic thrill
Their trumpets sound before mighty roar
I closed my eyes while my spirit soared
This dreadful Kingdom never was my home
Although I'm trapped my heart does roam
One memorable day my life gladly turned
I'd found a destiny;I earnestly yearned
Her ethereal beauty Oh!a heart did soar
There she appeared I shall seek no more
A lonely chambermaid is what they'd see
Their vision corrupted by sheer vanity
Oh!Dear Goddess;I shall whisper to thee
With each breath I've awaited patiently
Her beautiful heart I shall gently hold
I'll tell you tales of righteously bold
We're both low servants trapped in time
Where evils nurtured on demented rhyme
Grasp my hand and venture on from here
Our compass is faith not blinding fear
We'll travel forward were land is free
No dreadful conquests or mortals pleas
Surrender yourself beneath sturdy tree
I'll love you with passion but tenderly
Whisper while caught in blissful throes
These moans captured where nature grows
Then stare deeply into each others eyes
Such yearning sedated with gentle sighs
Our bodies in sync awaits sweet release
There souls are meshed by eternal peace
No longer we cower beneath an evil rule
Nor a mindless cruelty spawned by fools
Open this book that has never been read
Held by oppression they never were said
My enchanting Goddess please read to me
Them beautiful lips speak so eloquently
Her softened shoulders and skin so fair
Speaking of love while I brush her hair
Sunset yields towards star filled night
Our passionate moments reach new height
With our spirits flying above the Earth
A glorious destiny had been given birth

Written by CyPoet aka Cybear 8/5/08
:wink: flowerforyou :heart: :tongue: drinker


His Chambermaid

A kindness I see,
as treasure unfolds.
A weary knight,
his destiny foretold.
No one save, she,
could ere understand,
who is this soul,
that takes her hand.
Their will to breathe,
as battle within,
this beast of treachery,
again and again.
Unnoticed is she,
yet, knowing all well,
how to lift him,
ere he fall.
Under the canopy
of the silent skies,
there she waits
and dries her eyes.
A gift of rare,
love's circumstance.
His chambermaid
no happenstance.

Raine Les 8/5/2008

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Tue 08/05/08 04:57 PM


A mere poet surviving by stroke of pen
As countless perish within a lions den
I am no greater than any condemned man
But a servant beneath a Majesty's hand
No screams of mercy from innocent hung
My life is hinged upon silenced tongue
A windowed views of blood stained land
From fearless men waging a final stand
Emotions lie imprisoned within my room
Pungent smell of wax conceals my gloom
Truth be known I hold a secondary book
I faithfully kept within a mortar nook
The other is filthy with power & lusts
Nothing held from righteous Man's trust
Contemptuous words for my Majesty's eye
So appalled am I to write dreadful lies
An uncleaned feel through hateful hand
Yet appealing to tyrants on stolen land
Such arrogance sitting on gilded throne
I do hear gallows planks creak and moan
A hush falling over his Majesty's crowd
Motionless Knights stand tall and proud
Savage lusting wants for blood to spill
The feverish hunger and orgasmic thrill
Their trumpets sound before mighty roar
I closed my eyes while my spirit soared
This dreadful Kingdom never was my home
Although I'm trapped my heart does roam
One memorable day my life gladly turned
I'd found a destiny;I earnestly yearned
Her ethereal beauty Oh!a heart did soar
There she appeared I shall seek no more
A lonely chambermaid is what they'd see
Their vision corrupted by sheer vanity
Oh!Dear Goddess;I shall whisper to thee
With each breath I've awaited patiently
Her beautiful heart I shall gently hold
I'll tell you tales of righteously bold
We're both low servants trapped in time
Where evils nurtured on demented rhyme
Grasp my hand and venture on from here
Our compass is faith not blinding fear
We'll travel forward were land is free
No dreadful conquests or mortals pleas
Surrender yourself beneath sturdy tree
I'll love you with passion but tenderly
Whisper while caught in blissful throes
These moans captured where nature grows
Then stare deeply into each others eyes
Such yearning sedated with gentle sighs
Our bodies in sync awaits sweet release
There souls are meshed by eternal peace
No longer we cower beneath an evil rule
Nor a mindless cruelty spawned by fools
Open this book that has never been read
Held by oppression they never were said
My enchanting Goddess please read to me
Them beautiful lips speak so eloquently
Her softened shoulders and skin so fair
Speaking of love while I brush her hair
Sunset yields towards star filled night
Our passionate moments reach new height
With our spirits flying above the Earth
A glorious destiny had been given birth

Written by CyPoet aka Cybear 8/5/08
:wink: flowerforyou :heart: :tongue: drinker


His Chambermaid

A kindness I see,
as treasure unfolds.
A weary knight,
his destiny foretold.
No one save, she,
could ere understand,
who is this soul,
that takes her hand.
Their will to breathe,
as battle within,
this beast of treachery,
again and again.
Unnoticed is she,
yet, knowing all well,
how to lift him,
ere he fall.
Under the canopy
of the silent skies,
there she waits
and dries her eyes.
A gift of rare,
love's circumstance.
His chambermaid
no happenstance.

Raine Les 8/5/2008

This is such an Amazing!write my beautiful friend.I enjoyed it immensely.Such a beautiful compliment to accompany my final write here.I will drop in periodically of course to read your work.Godspeed!Cy :=)
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Tue 08/05/08 06:26 PM
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Wed 08/06/08 07:44 AM
"Them beautiful lips speak so eloquently
Her softened shoulders and skin so fair
Speaking of love while I brush her hair"

It could have all been paraphrased but I
smiled a little wider during those three lines.
bigsmile drinker

Great Write Cy!


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Wed 08/06/08 02:46 PM
flowerforyou :heart: That is so beautiful. I will miss you so much on here but we will still keep in touch.:heart: flowerforyou

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Wed 08/06/08 03:29 PM
D4tc~Thx!my friend for reading & commenting on this write.Ur critique was noted also but I chose intentionally not to para-phase.I wanted to prolong the write in a sense.In fact I feel so deep into it that I wanted to go further on-wards till they reached their destination but I wasn't sure if length parameters would come into play & I didn't want it split up.I'm glad U enjoyed it.Sadly that is my final write @ JSH/M2.Take care & I wish U the best of course.Godspeed!Cy
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Rush~My beautiful & cherished friend.I thank you ever kindly for your humbling words.I'm so happy that U enjoyed this write.Yes!indeed we shall stay in touch elsewhere.{{{{{{{bear~huggie}}}}}}
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Wed 08/06/08 04:05 PM
flowerforyou :heart: bravo.

gotta know to share, and I applaud your prose.

wonderful.


flowerforyou :heart: bigsmile


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Wed 08/06/08 04:23 PM

flowerforyou :heart: bravo.

gotta know to share, and I applaud your prose.

wonderful.


flowerforyou :heart: bigsmile



I Thank U!ever kindly sir.I appreciate U reading & commenting on this write.U truly inspire me to cont.writing.Perhaps on a distant shore but indeed I shall not forsake my quill or readers.I wish U the best to-wards your future endeavors.
Godspeed!Cy :smile: flowerforyou drinker :=)

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Wed 08/06/08 09:53 PM
Love & Light (((( Steven )))) where ever your pen takes you I am not far behind,,,

flowerforyou :heart:

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Thu 08/07/08 03:10 AM

Love & Light (((( Steven )))) where ever your pen takes you I am not far behind,,,

flowerforyou :heart:

Hi!Angel.Thx!4 reading & commenting my bearific friend.{{{{{bear~hug}}}}}We will always be deep in each others hearts 4 ever.Upon that U can rely & trust always.This was a very difficult & painful
decision to make.However we are already conn.
elsewhere so it's all good.I wont mention the specifics or names because I wouldn't want my final write reported as Drama & wiped off the board.We can share further info.through e-mail.
Much Luv & Light always Denise.Godspeed!Cy
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