Topic: ~My Final Prayer~
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Mon 08/04/08 04:44 AM
Deafening silence permeates my room
It's similar to some graveyard tomb
Needless time hangs upon dusty wall
Advances slowly to wards deaths call
Foolish notions imprisoned with lime
Seeking sound from a voiceless mime
Dreadful paradox of a sightless man
Fragmented logic corrupted with sand
A quest for balance longing to claim
Within deep fault there cowers blame
Harbored fear seeping from old skin
Unveiling wounds that fester within
Hardened pleas nibble away at faith
Steel lined sorrow spun upon a lathe
Insistent nightmare plague my dreams
Fate sealed door cuts off my screams
A bitter existence for a soul unknown
His brittle bones surrounded by stone
Anguish served from past tainted love
Awaits olive branch from Heaven above
With his timid steps circling within
Contemplates outcome by wages of sin
Seeking a path with a newfound course
Lined with happiness not dark remorse
Remaining heart given triumphant beat
By harnessed faith may he shun defeat
Injured doves longing glorious flight
Spirit soaring upon a moonlight night
Them trials in life remaining unknown
All truth be told yes now I've grown
There lies 2 choices within our life
Swimming in faith or drown in strife
With proper choice lies fruitful gain
May we never surrender to trials pain

Written by CyPoet aka Cybear 8/4/08
:wink: flowerforyou :heart: drinker

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Mon 08/04/08 04:53 AM
flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

Deafening silence permeates my room
It's similar to some graveyard tomb
Needless time hangs upon dusty wall
Advances slowly to wards deaths call
Foolish notions imprisoned with lime
Seeking sound from a voiceless mime
Dreadful paradox of a sightless man
Fragmented logic corrupted with sand
A quest for balance longing to claim
Within deep fault there cowers blame
Harbored fear seeping from old skin
Unveiling wounds that fester within
Hardened pleas nibble away at faith
Steel lined sorrow spun upon a lathe
Insistent nightmare plague my dreams
Fate sealed door cuts off my screams
A bitter existence for a soul unknown
His brittle bones surrounded by stone
Anguish served from past tainted love
Awaits olive branch from Heaven above
With his timid steps circling within
Contemplates outcome by wages of sin
Seeking a path with a newfound course
Lined with happiness not dark remorse
Remaining heart given triumphant beat
By harnessed faith may he shun defeat
Injured doves longing glorious flight
Spirit soaring upon a moonlight night
Them trials in life remaining unknown
All truth be told yes now I've grown
There lies 2 choices within our life
Swimming in faith or drown in strife
With proper choice lies fruitful gain
May we never surrender to trials pain

Written by CyPoet aka Cybear 8/4/08
:wink: flowerforyou :heart: drinker

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Mon 08/04/08 05:17 AM
Cy:

As usual, that is a beautiful piece of work. I enjoyed it very much
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Mon 08/04/08 05:32 AM
Frank~Thx! my friend 4 reading & commenting.I hope U have a wonderful week likewise.
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Dena~Thx!sweetheart{{{:wink:}}}flowerforyou
:heart:U truly inspire me my beautiful friend.:)

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Mon 08/04/08 05:49 AM
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Mon 08/04/08 06:06 AM
Thank you Stevenflowerforyou

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Mon 08/04/08 06:07 AM
Edited by CyPoet on Mon 08/04/08 06:13 AM

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F~1~C~Thx!sweetheart{{{:wink:}}}flowerforyou :heart:I hope U have a bearific week.T-Y 4 reading & commenting.:smile: drinker
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Kim~Thx!sweetheart{{{:wink:}}}flowerforyou :heart:Ur absolutely welcome & I am humbled by your kind words.I hope U have a bearific week & may your path always remain illuminated throughout life.:smile:

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Mon 08/04/08 08:09 AM


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F~1~C~Thx!sweetheart{{{:wink:}}}flowerforyou :heart:I hope U have a bearific week.T-Y 4 reading & commenting.:smile: drinker
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Kim~Thx!sweetheart{{{:wink:}}}flowerforyou :heart:Ur absolutely welcome & I am humbled by your kind words.I hope U have a bearific week & may your path always remain illuminated throughout life.:smile:
bigsmile flowerforyou smooched

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Mon 08/04/08 08:28 AM
VERY NICE Cy! bigsmile

I love your structured style of metrics. It always flows well and paints deep pictures. drinker

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Mon 08/04/08 10:27 AM

VERY NICE Cy! bigsmile

I love your structured style of metrics. It always flows well and paints deep pictures. drinker

D4tc~Thank You!my bearific friend 4 reading & commenting on this write.I am very grateful 4 ur compliment 4 it drives me 2 cont.lifting my quill.
drinker :smile: drinker Godspeed!Cy.:smile:

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Mon 08/04/08 07:29 PM



your words can reach a person's spirit.

I hope you always 'swim in faith'


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Mon 08/04/08 07:34 PM
thank you. i enjoy the ones that are easy to read and understand. some people write in such depth, it seems they lose their train of thought, or at least i lose it? lol. this is a good one for me. my dementia didnt get lost. ok, i am getting lost in babble here. hugggssss

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Mon 08/04/08 08:56 PM
Thank you for your encouragement. Too often I see alone as a time to avoid, for pain looms and hovers. For many here that go through such heart wrenching times, the strength they live in their choices to give us glimpses is such a gift..oneself is a sacrifice..I love the messages here.
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Mon 08/04/08 09:43 PM
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I would like to thank you all of you beautiful ladies for reading & commenting on this write.
Your words inspire me very deeply and they lend assurance to the fact that I should never retire my quill.Mere words can not express how grateful I am for this.I love writing very much though all truth be known I equally enjoy sharing thoughts,
experiences,trials,failure,success,faith,etc.But most importantly I want to enlighten my readers in the hopes that they may prosper from it's revealing nature.My greatest accomplishment then would be to elevate one's spirit so that they may persevere through life's trials & never succumb to there darker moments within life.Godspeed!Cy:)