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Deafening silence permeates my room
It's similar to some graveyard tomb Needless time hangs upon dusty wall Advances slowly to wards deaths call Foolish notions imprisoned with lime Seeking sound from a voiceless mime Dreadful paradox of a sightless man Fragmented logic corrupted with sand A quest for balance longing to claim Within deep fault there cowers blame Harbored fear seeping from old skin Unveiling wounds that fester within Hardened pleas nibble away at faith Steel lined sorrow spun upon a lathe Insistent nightmare plague my dreams Fate sealed door cuts off my screams A bitter existence for a soul unknown His brittle bones surrounded by stone Anguish served from past tainted love Awaits olive branch from Heaven above With his timid steps circling within Contemplates outcome by wages of sin Seeking a path with a newfound course Lined with happiness not dark remorse Remaining heart given triumphant beat By harnessed faith may he shun defeat Injured doves longing glorious flight Spirit soaring upon a moonlight night Them trials in life remaining unknown All truth be told yes now I've grown There lies 2 choices within our life Swimming in faith or drown in strife With proper choice lies fruitful gain May we never surrender to trials pain Written by CyPoet aka Cybear 8/4/08 |
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Deafening silence permeates my room It's similar to some graveyard tomb Needless time hangs upon dusty wall Advances slowly to wards deaths call Foolish notions imprisoned with lime Seeking sound from a voiceless mime Dreadful paradox of a sightless man Fragmented logic corrupted with sand A quest for balance longing to claim Within deep fault there cowers blame Harbored fear seeping from old skin Unveiling wounds that fester within Hardened pleas nibble away at faith Steel lined sorrow spun upon a lathe Insistent nightmare plague my dreams Fate sealed door cuts off my screams A bitter existence for a soul unknown His brittle bones surrounded by stone Anguish served from past tainted love Awaits olive branch from Heaven above With his timid steps circling within Contemplates outcome by wages of sin Seeking a path with a newfound course Lined with happiness not dark remorse Remaining heart given triumphant beat By harnessed faith may he shun defeat Injured doves longing glorious flight Spirit soaring upon a moonlight night Them trials in life remaining unknown All truth be told yes now I've grown There lies 2 choices within our life Swimming in faith or drown in strife With proper choice lies fruitful gain May we never surrender to trials pain Written by CyPoet aka Cybear 8/4/08 |
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Cy:
As usual, that is a beautiful piece of work. I enjoyed it very much |
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Frank~Thx! my friend 4 reading & commenting.I hope U have a wonderful week likewise.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Dena~Thx!sweetheart{{{}}} U truly inspire me my beautiful friend.:) |
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Thank you Steven
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Edited by
CyPoet
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Mon 08/04/08 06:13 AM
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F~1~C~Thx!sweetheart{{{}}} I hope U have a bearific week.T-Y 4 reading & commenting. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Kim~Thx!sweetheart{{{}}} Ur absolutely welcome & I am humbled by your kind words.I hope U have a bearific week & may your path always remain illuminated throughout life. |
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F~1~C~Thx!sweetheart{{{}}} I hope U have a bearific week.T-Y 4 reading & commenting. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Kim~Thx!sweetheart{{{}}} Ur absolutely welcome & I am humbled by your kind words.I hope U have a bearific week & may your path always remain illuminated throughout life. |
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VERY NICE Cy!
I love your structured style of metrics. It always flows well and paints deep pictures. |
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VERY NICE Cy! I love your structured style of metrics. It always flows well and paints deep pictures. D4tc~Thank You!my bearific friend 4 reading & commenting on this write.I am very grateful 4 ur compliment 4 it drives me 2 cont.lifting my quill. Godspeed!Cy. |
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your words can reach a person's spirit. I hope you always 'swim in faith' |
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thank you. i enjoy the ones that are easy to read and understand. some people write in such depth, it seems they lose their train of thought, or at least i lose it? lol. this is a good one for me. my dementia didnt get lost. ok, i am getting lost in babble here. hugggssss
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Thank you for your encouragement. Too often I see alone as a time to avoid, for pain looms and hovers. For many here that go through such heart wrenching times, the strength they live in their choices to give us glimpses is such a gift..oneself is a sacrifice..I love the messages here.
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:::: , : - -:- - : , :::::Dena~
:::: ) ` - : : - `(:::::: ::: / : : : :`\: : :\ ::::F~1~C ::: |: : : : : |: : : :| :: :::: \ : : : :/ : : / :::::MisKim :::::: `=(:/:)=` ::::: :::::::: `-;`;-’ :::::::: Britty ::::::::::: || :: , :::::: ::::::::::: ||_-’| :::::: Seena ::::::: |’-: || : / :::::: ::::::::\ : || :’ / ::::::Sharris ::::::: \ : || : /::::::: ::::::::: \:|| : /:::::: Frank ::::::::: \:||:/ ::::::: :::::::::::\||/::::::::: D4tc ::::::::::::|| ::::::::: ::::::::::::|| ::::::::: ::::::::::::|| ::::::::: ::::::::::::|| ::::::::: ::::::::::::||:::::::::: I would like to thank you all of you beautiful ladies for reading & commenting on this write. Your words inspire me very deeply and they lend assurance to the fact that I should never retire my quill.Mere words can not express how grateful I am for this.I love writing very much though all truth be known I equally enjoy sharing thoughts, experiences,trials,failure,success,faith,etc.But most importantly I want to enlighten my readers in the hopes that they may prosper from it's revealing nature.My greatest accomplishment then would be to elevate one's spirit so that they may persevere through life's trials & never succumb to there darker moments within life.Godspeed!Cy:) |
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