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I'm surprised to see so few men have made an attempt. Perhaps i'll test the waters so to speak. How about a cross between Maya Angelou and Mark Twain.
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Edited by
TimothyK87
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Fri 08/01/08 12:15 PM
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Well I hope this meets your standers MsWizard... Tell me what you think to.. Innocence,curiosity behold those eyes, She hides away her tears,smiles and dismisses her sighs. She is so discreet with those dimples and rosy cheeks, her laugh makes you wish you are the one she seeks. Her hands of delicacy,crowned with good nature,warmth and comfort. protecting her loved ones from all the negatives and hurt. Her lips of love sing music of beauiful notes, out of her mouth is advice,good words and quotes. Her soul that brings peace and joy as she approaches, her chest you cry on,an outfit for all her brooches. Her feet walk only the path of justice,rightousness and peace. She converts others to good,their evil actions cease. She trods onto thorns of misery and strife, she unlatches the doors,unlatches a book to her life. I forgot the important part,the most important part of all. it's the heart which carries emotions,feelings big and small. It holds your pain and mine deep down in the pit. tending to your wounds when you trip and you hit. When you hit the temple of God,so hard,you cannot rise. You see her understanding smile and your affliction has diminished its size. She's ready to meet the day,ready to walk with poise. she's ready to be an angel,ready to project her voice. Gorgeous! Thank you! I'm glad you enjoy My writing , if anyone want to see more just ask.. I'm scared of no challange, A ture man is never scared of showing his ture self to the world. |
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I'm surprised to see so few men have made an attempt. Perhaps i'll test the waters so to speak. How about a cross between Maya Angelou and Mark Twain. Works for me! |
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Well I hope this meets your standers MsWizard... Tell me what you think to.. Innocence,curiosity behold those eyes, She hides away her tears,smiles and dismisses her sighs. She is so discreet with those dimples and rosy cheeks, her laugh makes you wish you are the one she seeks. Her hands of delicacy,crowned with good nature,warmth and comfort. protecting her loved ones from all the negatives and hurt. Her lips of love sing music of beauiful notes, out of her mouth is advice,good words and quotes. Her soul that brings peace and joy as she approaches, her chest you cry on,an outfit for all her brooches. Her feet walk only the path of justice,rightousness and peace. She converts others to good,their evil actions cease. She trods onto thorns of misery and strife, she unlatches the doors,unlatches a book to her life. I forgot the important part,the most important part of all. it's the heart which carries emotions,feelings big and small. It holds your pain and mine deep down in the pit. tending to your wounds when you trip and you hit. When you hit the temple of God,so hard,you cannot rise. You see her understanding smile and your affliction has diminished its size. She's ready to meet the day,ready to walk with poise. she's ready to be an angel,ready to project her voice. Gorgeous! Thank you! A true man is never scared of showing his ture self to the world. I agree! |
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What makes a woman.
In my eyes tho sometimes blind, A woman makes me see. Through my ears that seldom hear, A woman whispers and I agree. With my lips of mute content, A woman speaks for me. And with my mind closed off at times, A woman speaks reason freely. With my heart that falls apart, A woman mends tenderly. Through my soul with no control, A woman calms the beast. As I go through my day by day, And times get harder and harder. A woman to me that is true and real, Makes me feel like I can walk on water. RK08 |
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What makes a woman. In my eyes tho sometimes blind, A woman makes me see. Through my ears that seldom hear, A woman whispers and I agree. With my lips of mute content, A woman speaks for me. And with my mind closed off at times, A woman speaks reason freely. With my heart that falls apart, A woman mends tenderly. Through my soul with no control, A woman calms the beast. As I go through my day by day, And times get harder and harder. A woman to me that is true and real, Makes me feel like I can walk on water. RK08 Lovely sentiments.... |
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What makes a woman. In my eyes tho sometimes blind, A woman makes me see. Through my ears that seldom hear, A woman whispers and I agree. With my lips of mute content, A woman speaks for me. And with my mind closed off at times, A woman speaks reason freely. With my heart that falls apart, A woman mends tenderly. Through my soul with no control, A woman calms the beast. As I go through my day by day, And times get harder and harder. A woman to me that is true and real, Makes me feel like I can walk on water. RK08 That is beautiful... |
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The core of any woman.
is to simply admire and adore. For in her substance, she will always be more. Fancy, fit, and sassy, Elegance, lace, and classy! Fighting daily hassles, with all the crazy assholes. Keeping her children happy, never to snappy. A teacher, a cook, a policeman on call. A reader a nurse to help mend after a fall. Professional in everyway, yet still able to drop her hair and play. Remarkible, mothered down through years of traditional care. generation after generation. From daughter to mother. her life touched stories to share. This core the essence of her seed, stiil offering her heart for her man to feed. Romantic, and sometimes frantic. Always capable, nothing seen as impossible. Sending out signs of knowledge, all with-in this nuturing motherhood inter-world-college, of a woman. To find her core is to know her complete. But that is a life-long feat! |
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The core of any woman. is to simply admire and adore. For in her substance, she will always be more. Fancy, fit, and sassy, Elegance, lace, and classy! Fighting daily hassles, with all the crazy assholes. Keeping her children happy, never to snappy. A teacher, a cook, a policeman on call. A reader a nurse to help mend after a fall. Professional in everyway, yet still able to drop her hair and play. Remarkible, mothered down through years of traditional care. generation after generation. From daughter to mother. her life touched stories to share. This core the essence of her seed, stiil offering her heart for her man to feed. Romantic, and sometimes frantic. Always capable, nothing seen as impossible. Sending out signs of knowledge, all with-in this nuturing motherhood inter-world-college, of a woman. To find her core is to know her complete. But that is a life-long feat! That is beautiful T !!! |
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MsWizard what did you think of the poem i sent you? Does it not fit your challenge?
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MsWizard what did you think of the poem i sent you? Does it not fit your challenge? I think it's absolutely stunning and could not figure out why you did not post it Blue. Would you please do so? I did in fact love it enough to print it out~ |
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Edited by
Unknow
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Mon 08/04/08 07:41 PM
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A woman is the essence, to every male writers soul.
the feel of her warm soft skin, her beauty to behold, the taste of her womanhood, the yearning in her eyes, gentle moaning in her voice, as your kissing down her thigh her goose pimples riseing, from a gentle loveing kiss, the excitement of her appearing, from the oceans salty mist, the shining of her hair, in the moons romantic light, the waiting for tomorrow, when you kiss good night |
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A woman is the essence, to every male writers soul. the feel of her warm soft skin, her beauty to behold, the taste of her womanhood, the yearning in her eyes, gentle moaning in her voice, as your kissing down her thigh her goose pimples riseing, from a gentle loveing kiss, the excitement of her appearing, from the oceans salty mist, the shining of her hair, in the moons romantic light, the waiting for tomorrow, when you kiss good night 10001 what a lovely and sensuous soul you have....sigh... |
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How did i do or am in trouble
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How did i do or am in trouble Oh, need you ask? It was lovely...sigh... |
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Edited by
Unknow
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Mon 08/04/08 07:46 PM
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ty Mswizard. sorry i type slow
A woman is the essence, to every male writers soul. the feel of her warm soft skin, her beauty to behold, the taste of her womanhood, the yearning in her eyes, gentle moaning in her voice, as your kissing down her thigh her goose pimples riseing, from a gentle loveing kiss, the excitement of her appearing, from the oceans salty mist, the shining of her hair, in the moons romantic light, the waiting for tomorrow, when you kiss good night 10001 what a lovely and sensuous soul you have....sigh... |
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How did i do or am in trouble |
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How did i do or am in trouble Don't you fret non darlin' you did just wonderfully! |
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