Topic: Heart Strings Played
PoeticMaster's photo
Thu 07/31/08 09:30 PM
Discovering you is an endless maze
as new depths unfold
with passing of days.
Your eyes capture mine
with a mesmerizing hold.
Like a child I'm feeling shy
and yet I am bold.

Gaining security with each new day,
I hang on your words
and savor what you say.
Such a comfort and ease
in your presence I feel,
Old wounds scarred over
have now begun to heal.

I'm laughing with a joy
unfelt for many years,
as you release all the chains
locked up by my fears.
No questions of doubt
like I have with the rest,
No eggshells to walk upon
with each movement a test.

Opening hidden vaults
I dreamt were long sealed,
A peaceful easy feeling
has been revealed.
So life is silently
letting me know
exactly how deep
these feelings can go.

Unleashing all the passions
still unknown to me,
by teaching me to trust,
while helping me see.
At night I lay awake
yearning for your touch,
never before this
did I want a woman so much!

You've unlocked doors
for which there was no key,
so "Keep this woman"
is my hearts final plea.
Freedom is calling me
in amazing new ways,
As my sensible mind
now drifts in a haze.

Suddenly jolting
as if from a sleep,
my heart now awakens
and emerges from deep.
My soul has responded,
when hearing your voice.
At last I may acknowledge
that I never had a choice!

On a path that destiny
so long ago paved,
This brave fractured soul
has at last been saved.


LAMom's photo
Thu 07/31/08 09:33 PM
And He Breathe's flowerforyou

A beautiful powerful song from your Soul flowerforyou

bastet126's photo
Fri 08/01/08 05:02 AM
simply.....:heart:

flame1cutie's photo
Fri 08/01/08 05:28 AM
Thank you very much for that write:heart: flowerforyou flowerforyou

AngelLight's photo
Fri 08/01/08 06:05 AM
Awesome Poetic...love the write flowerforyou

no photo
Fri 08/01/08 07:49 AM
....and finally:heart: flowers flowers

luv2roknroll's photo
Sat 08/02/08 01:41 PM

That was so incredibly beautiful...im rendered speechless. The mere hope that one person could feel so much for another again, inspires me, and also gives me hope for love in my future.

Thank you for the wonderful gift.:heart: flowers

no photo
Sat 08/02/08 08:36 PM
wonderful, thank you
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