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Topic: unfurled
PoeticMaster Joined Fri 07/18/08 Posts: 411	Tue 07/29/08 03:59 PM
moments twirl and swirl— stack like tumbled building blocks some in bright colorful hues and others in pouty pastel blues then one day a moment comes to dock within a hidden barren sandy shore sets its anchor wide and skin-deep, while it gets comfortable in the sweep of time having reached forevermore and that is when love unfurls—

myanimalcracker Joined Wed 02/27/08 Posts: 900	Tue 07/29/08 04:03 PM
Beautiful

PoeticMaster Joined Fri 07/18/08 Posts: 411	Tue 07/29/08 10:31 PM
Beautiful thank you animal

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Tue 07/29/08 10:44 PM
Yepppppppppppppppppp I am so a Fan

flame1cutie Joined Thu 04/24/08 Posts: 7307	Tue 07/29/08 10:48 PM


d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Tue 07/29/08 11:33 PM
Great Write. Short and powerful.

Amathyst2 Joined Thu 06/19/08 Posts: 1226	Wed 07/30/08 12:47 AM
Now that one really made me think. I really like that one!

Unknow Joined Thu 06/14/07 Posts: 2155	Wed 07/30/08 08:43 AM
Well done!

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Wed 07/30/08 04:45 PM
i felt that twirl and swirl through me

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