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In a cold sweat I’m buried in
Negligence And you’re very Nice to come here and carry me Down the stairs and Over Jesus, Joseph, and Mary Until our final dying day Taking its last breath from us Only to, at the end, smile and say For all of the times you were generous your Efforts have no meaning Vicious? Yes, but you’re bleeding from your Ears, that’s why you can’t hear the cantor leading the congregation through Revival so I tell You to imagine the worst. Now Take that and imagine worse. That’s How far gone I am- does it really make a difference if I’m gifted or cursed? Never in the average, always God’s anointed selfless last or the devil’s selfish first Tell myself to walk outside, would you please Hold my place in line? Eventually I’ll make my way back but Who knows if I’ll be in time Or if such a ludicrous idea Really exists you know you don’t have to Listen to this Darling, feel free to just dismiss my Constant Aching No body else is watching cause No body else gives a damn Our secrets are here for the Taking but Sadly you have been mistaking All of this gossip for who I actually am This melodramatic staging of salvation Is in dire need of intermission So lets rise against this Frivolous storyline You and Me Exiting cause we’re doing just fine And we’d sooner Need our Drunken driving publicized than Make ourselves once more apologize for these Years of bohemian ecstasy Courting their way through the closed door Outlandishly caressing the asshole taking Notes 'til his aged fingers are sore Venom Is a Conniving Term-as If we wouldn’t all prefer to take Our prey as easily as the Never failing Snake |
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good job
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lovely acrostic
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Edited by
d4tc
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Tue 07/29/08 12:27 PM
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Incredible. The acostic bonus!
Goody eye Poetic! I didn't even notice that until I read your comment. Very observant. Now I will be looking for acrostic intentional or accidental in all of Kat's poems for now on. Great job Kat. |
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Thank you (((Mirror, Poetic, Kim, J)))
Incredible. The acostic bonus! Goody eye Poetic! I didn't even notice that until I read your comment. Very observant. Now I will be looking for acrostic intentional or accidental in all of Kat's poems for now on. Great job Kat. I do that a lot... Thank you sweets |
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Your only goal now is to write something that will disappoint. But I feel that goal will remain out of your reach forever!!!!!!!
Fantastic!! |
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Another very good one.
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Enough frivolity!
Come dance. |
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